"Washu? Do you think you could make him a spaceship?"

With Washu, that is a DANGEROUS request. Next thing you know Harry has an alternate form that looks like the Yamato! (or maybe the Warspite)

Why Ginny I prefer Sasami and others like Daphne, Susan much better

Great story, well done :)

In the books Good LOST, Badly!

Too many innocents were killed, too many like the Malfoys went free!

Dumbledore FAILED!

And Rowling ripped us off, seven books of horror, suffering and tragedy for Nothing...

Ginny has SIX brothers.

Dumbledore is not actively evil like Tom.

Albus is ARROGANT in the extreme and does not take advise, places the redemption of the damned over protecting the innocent.

Albus Dumbledore is guilty of HUBRIS, his is the evil of "good intentions".

If Dumbledore had FORCED true trials for all death eaters just after Tom first died he would have prevented thousands of deaths!

Isn't it supposed to be miyah though? I guess it's close enough

Faking his death was beyond fucking stupid. I thought you were going this retarded direction when you mentioned it earlier but I hoped at least one of your earlier reviewers would call you out on your lack of brain matter. Shame that they either didn’t or you were hell bent on your retarded plot. Fucking imbecile.

No ginny relationship with harry potter needs a harem adopted to the juraian royal family as seto's son. Dumbledore bashing, selective weasley bashing: ron weasley, molly weasley, percy weasley. Harry potter's harem: daphnee greengrass, sasami, Luna lovegood, fleur or Gabrielle delacour.

I havent commented in previous chapters mostly because I really liked the story and didn't find big mistakes, the little points that I found are that Moody call Harry Little Harry, I don't know why but I always thought that he would use Potter and not Harry, a more formal and not familiar way. The other point being Dobby, in the chapters that he appeared he spoke very well, we don't see the broken English expected of house elves (at least in the majority of fanfics). When Harry rescued his classmates we don't see Astoria say anything, it was somewhat rare, children are not often in silence and almost always Astoria is portrayed as a hyperkinetic child. The last point being that we sometimes encounter a missing " from a dialog.

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

This went from an amazing story to fucking retarded real quick. Faking his death was probably the most stupid plot decision you could have possibly made. Fuck you for ruining what was great.

This story was nothing short of phenomenal. Well done.

very good

Kaito is hungry wants to eat

OMG this is absolutely the best crossover ever! Brilliant and so well written! I truly wish there were more of this type of storyline !