|Reviews for PROJECT: Elite One|
| MidnightDeath666 chapter 10 . 9/3/2010
good fic so far but ive got a question for you in your summary it says Ash/Angie and Ash/Zoey does that mean ash is gona ditch angie and get with zoey later on or something
| Artysian chapter 9 . 5/22/2010
good story, not the best but it has potential. update soon
| fac.et.spera chapter 9 . 5/22/2010
I like it, but if the spelling and grammar is as confusing as it has been, I'm not reading this anymore.
| fac.et.spera chapter 4 . 5/22/2010
Ok. So far I love it, but could you PLEASEE SPELL!
| Gerbilftw chapter 9 . 5/22/2010
Nice chapter, but there's a few things you might need to think about:
First: The rating can't be that low, I would suggest that you change it to T
Second: Try and give the characters more emotions, it was like "Ash! You're alive after so many years and everybody thought you were dead... but forget that, now we will fight." Get what I mean?
Anyway, I guess that I'll be seeing you in the next chapter!
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/8/2010
I vote for Zoey too!
| gonelikeme chapter 8 . 2/7/2010
I vote AshxZoey
| Jiyle chapter 7 . 1/18/2010
I like it, though you should check your spelling, some of sentences don't make sense since you spell wrong and use the wrong words. English isn't your first language, is it? UPDATE SOON
| Jiyle chapter 4 . 1/18/2010
OMG, it is so obvious that Ash is Elite One. I mean, Charizard, Aura, and when he said 'I guess I wasn't'. He is a horrible liar but somehow they fell for it. UPDATE SOON
| Hell Changer chapter 7 . 12/18/2009
A male voice was heard,” This is Bruno, Elite One we have a code Red, repeat Code Red, Team Rocket has lunched attacks on all our last cities, we lost Pewter city about an hour ago,” Ash continued to listen, “ They’ve also lunch attacks on Hoenn and Sinnoh, Johto’s sending men but it will take time.”
lunched attacks? It's launched attacks. Because in this text Bruno basically says twice that they're eating attacks. Maybe you need an beta-reader:P. It's an funny mistake hahaha...
| The Dark Side Has Yaoi chapter 5 . 10/9/2009
| Fire Drastar chapter 5 . 10/9/2009
Such a good chapter. Know everyone knows Ash is alive, but some don't know were. Poor Ash, he alienated himself to protect his friends. I can't wait to see Ash beat up some more team rocket. Whatever happened to Jessie, James and Meowth? Only criticism is watch some of your spelling. It's stare, not stair. Of course, I probably spelled something wrong in this review, eveyone does it.
| Batthan the Dark Knight chapter 4 . 9/8/2009
Is it possible that Elite one could be Ash?
| The Dark Side Has Yaoi chapter 4 . 9/6/2009
update! he he he!
| Crazyficfan chapter 3 . 8/31/2009
nice story, update soon.