|Reviews for Hawaiian Paradise|
| Kate Snape21 chapter 5 . 7/9/2015
love this story i would love to hear more and what happens :)
| Ayla.x chapter 5 . 10/10/2010
hey i really love your stories :) please dont give up on them, your a really good writter.
| Sparkleyangel chapter 5 . 7/12/2010
i like it :D
| Girlz-Rule chapter 5 . 7/12/2010
great new chapter, i love the progression! update soon:D
| Jacquelineloveswriting chapter 5 . 7/9/2010
Update soon, great chapter :)
| RJRRAA chapter 5 . 7/9/2010
LOVED IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH, PLZ PLZ PLZ WRITE SOON.
| Girlz-Rule chapter 4 . 5/16/2010
great new chapter, update soon:D
| twilightsaga1918 chapter 4 . 5/11/2010
Please finish i love it
| Jacquelineloveswriting chapter 4 . 4/20/2010
Awesome chapter, glad that you updated so soon. Can't wait :D
| AmandaDWeber30 chapter 4 . 4/18/2010
i love your story..its really good so far..please update soon! :)
| Awkwardauthor chapter 3 . 4/17/2010
Can't wait 4 the next chapter. seems a bit funny that Rosalie and Alice left Bella behind. And i can't wait 2 see what locations will be used in the fanfic, considering that i live in Hawaii myself, in honolulu. and one of the most coolest malls there is ala moana because it like, has three levels and have huge stores. i go there countless times.
| kyrandiana chapter 3 . 4/17/2010
Tis very good update again soon sorry about your mum
| Jacquelineloveswriting chapter 3 . 4/17/2010
Rofl! They left Bella! Update soon please cant wait!
| EGG BEASTIE chapter 3 . 4/17/2010
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
| Junosphere chapter 3 . 4/17/2010
OMG! So funny!
'Rosalie we left Bella' Ha ha
Please update soon!