Reviews for Enemy Mine
Fanfic-Critic1805 chapter 33 . 6/16/2014
Wow you've done a really great job with this story. I loved your charachter development and you really got the personality traits just right. Edward and Bella's close relationship and wit was written impecably. My only major issue is the spelling and overall repetetiveness. I feel as though the issue with Jacob and Bella's strained relationship with her parents were really milked for all they were worth. Just an FYI, the word straight has a freaking G! I think all in all you did a great job especially with the lemons! #Sexy! On a more serious note spelling and grammar were truly your downfall and congrats on the publishing! I would give this story an 8.75/10. Well done.
Kimmie2445 chapter 3 . 3/25/2014
LOVE IT! This is a really cute story!
Kimmie2445 chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
LOL! This is TOO funny! LOVE IT!
BridieM chapter 33 . 3/16/2014
Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Enjoyed your art. :D
BridieM chapter 31 . 3/16/2014
That was a good session with her family. :D
BridieM chapter 28 . 3/16/2014
Congrats on your graduation. I hope is working out for.

You gave me a hearty laughter out loud moment with Emmett's $7 contribution to the swear jar! LOL

And Bella is right to insist that Charlie talk to her first. :D
BridieM chapter 24 . 3/15/2014
Excellent writing. :D
BridieM chapter 23 . 3/15/2014
Momma Bear Esme is about to hit her strides. ;P. Suffer Charlie. :D
BridieM chapter 20 . 3/15/2014
WOW. Powerful. Emotional. Very moving. *takes deep breath*. :D
BridieM chapter 15 . 3/15/2014
Gotta love a 'take no prisoners' Rosalie! :D
BridieM chapter 14 . 3/15/2014
Can't believe a cop would react like this. And Renee after seeing the bruises. What f**k ups! Sorry for the language. ;)
BridieM chapter 12 . 3/15/2014
So regardless of the AU Eddie is still a ... tree climber. ;P. Another powerful chapter. :D
BridieM chapter 10 . 3/15/2014
Powerful chapters. :D
BridieM chapter 4 . 3/15/2014
You have brought back so many naive, playful,thrilling, devilish and exhilarating memories. Thank you. :D
BridieM chapter 3 . 3/15/2014
Sorry. I have been enjoying this story so much that I have neglected to review. I am enjoying the situations, the dialogue, the humour and the characterisations. This is such a good read. :D
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