|Reviews for No longer in the Present|
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/25/2013
Does he have a condition of smirking too much?
| Azure Shine chapter 14 . 12/29/2012
Ah...! love this story!
most person always make Tea want stay in past with Atem but you make Atem force her stay with him, this the one reason i like this and Atem personally always so nice but you make his so cruel but i like his! this story so unique :)
| Azure Shine chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
I love Atem personally in this story!
you have unique story, this is so good :)
| The Queen of Water chapter 14 . 6/10/2012
I like this story
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
u should write part 2 wats going to happen when tea and atem are married are they going to have kids wats going to happen to atem and zork the dark one please it will make a great part 2 for your story please with a cherry on top ,stargirl
| Famous Fault chapter 14 . 8/11/2011
I like this story. I do. But i got so annoyed by Atem.
And although i know the Pharaoh can be vengeful at times 8putting a man on fire, killing them with a scorpion) he would never say thing like: this will be fun! He's always dead serious.
So even if he would play such a game against Tea he wouldn't ever find it funny. He does it to show them their own weaknesses. He's just being really cruel! Keeping her against her will. Sorry, not the Atem i know.
However. It's funny to see your english improving the further you get into the story.
Although i must point out (and perhaps I'm not the first. it's a disturbing fault) it's (as example) "Is everything ready for tonight?" Atem asked* instead of "Is everything ready for tonight?" Asked Atem.
You get the point.
love the story and i saw you made a continue on it. I'll certainley read it.
| lilyflower chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
Hi, I have read your story and I really love it very much. The way you try to make Anzu and Atem to be a couple is quite relevant even though It is not seen in the anime.
I am a great fan of this couple when I first saw the movie long ago. So would you please let me have your permission to translate your story in to Vietnames? I would be greatful if you agree otherwise thank for writing this story
You can respond my suggestion by sending yahoo at this address: evergreen_stems yahoo . com
| EchizenRyoma chapter 14 . 3/14/2011
what will happen to tea when her memories return and what about the marriage between her and atem? will she still stay with him? i hope she stays with him. it's getting interesting. i knew atem felt something for her, even when he is different. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
| Smile-bestthingintheworld chapter 14 . 11/9/2010
aww come on. I wanted to see the wedding night. :( haha. good story though!
| xsilvermistx chapter 14 . 3/29/2010
omg that was such a great ending
| Relena01 chapter 14 . 10/24/2009
M that I can tell you of this history in spite of all has already told you that of cold heart of atem but, the one of not reminding to firebrand that if but to remove him its memory and to force her to that marries him... and overalls the even end he not lacks my view something you if they have told it to you it is with flavor or pleasure to little east fanfic, you could make the continuation or to give him an end that is to think that it is what happens but it advances with firebrand and its friends
| Naftie chapter 14 . 9/10/2009
Damn, this story is just getting better and beter
keep up the good work!
| freedomstar chapter 14 . 8/24/2009
Go on make a sequel, that was excellent, it just feels like you can continue the story!
| monkeyillusion chapter 14 . 8/24/2009
the pharaoh is NOT that cold (heartless!)
i guess I'm just speaking as someone who hasn't watched it all, hasn't learnt the end- but seriously, how could he be so CRUEL!
and as far as i can tell, Tea was only what 16!
it IS a good story, but not with these particular characters.
Maybe i'm just sad cos it's got such a SAD ending!
the pharaoh doesn't say stuff like "this will be fun"
i mean, isn't he nice, modest, RESPECTFUL, and kind!
i'm only up to episode 120 so maybe theres a detail i'm missing but...
| fantasia-49 chapter 14 . 8/23/2009
oh oh i loved this story at least even if at the beginning i feared it wouldn't end well but no you have made a good end!
thank you for this one and i will here for your other stories