|Reviews for No longer in the Present|
| Wolfie chapter 5 . 5/3/2015
I would've ignored the fact a monster was comin towards me and start being all "OH HECK NO. YOU ARE NOT GOINGG TO KISS ME. SHOOO!" /headbutts/
| kitanalao chapter 5 . 12/21/2014
waw... kiss?!. i wonder why atem kiss her?... did he fall for her somehow..
| kitanalao chapter 4 . 12/21/2014
ohoh... she get caught.. i wonder what will happen... next.. oh i am worry...
| kitanalao chapter 3 . 12/21/2014
uh...oh... i feel bad for tea... i hope be alright...
| kitanalao chapter 2 . 12/21/2014
hmm... i see i hope tea will be alright. since atem who in this story is not the same atem...
| kitanalao chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
intriguing process.. i'll put this into my fav list...
| Ashley chapter 13 . 7/31/2014
Like story but atem not know hid friend here
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/25/2013
Does he have a condition of smirking too much?
| Azure Shine chapter 14 . 12/29/2012
Ah...! love this story!
most person always make Tea want stay in past with Atem but you make Atem force her stay with him, this the one reason i like this and Atem personally always so nice but you make his so cruel but i like his! this story so unique :)
| Azure Shine chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
I love Atem personally in this story!
you have unique story, this is so good :)
| The Queen of Water chapter 14 . 6/10/2012
I like this story
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
u should write part 2 wats going to happen when tea and atem are married are they going to have kids wats going to happen to atem and zork the dark one please it will make a great part 2 for your story please with a cherry on top ,stargirl
| Famous Fault chapter 14 . 8/11/2011
I like this story. I do. But i got so annoyed by Atem.
And although i know the Pharaoh can be vengeful at times 8putting a man on fire, killing them with a scorpion) he would never say thing like: this will be fun! He's always dead serious.
So even if he would play such a game against Tea he wouldn't ever find it funny. He does it to show them their own weaknesses. He's just being really cruel! Keeping her against her will. Sorry, not the Atem i know.
However. It's funny to see your english improving the further you get into the story.
Although i must point out (and perhaps I'm not the first. it's a disturbing fault) it's (as example) "Is everything ready for tonight?" Atem asked* instead of "Is everything ready for tonight?" Asked Atem.
You get the point.
love the story and i saw you made a continue on it. I'll certainley read it.
| lilyflower chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
Hi, I have read your story and I really love it very much. The way you try to make Anzu and Atem to be a couple is quite relevant even though It is not seen in the anime.
I am a great fan of this couple when I first saw the movie long ago. So would you please let me have your permission to translate your story in to Vietnames? I would be greatful if you agree otherwise thank for writing this story
You can respond my suggestion by sending yahoo at this address: evergreen_stems yahoo . com
| EchizenRyoma chapter 14 . 3/14/2011
what will happen to tea when her memories return and what about the marriage between her and atem? will she still stay with him? i hope she stays with him. it's getting interesting. i knew atem felt something for her, even when he is different. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.