Reviews for Sloppy Firsts
Lai Jun Chen chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
I thought it was very funny. I haven't always been much of a fan of Link (in fact I really, really didn't like him), but aftter the last few -Man chapters, he's grown on me. So, I'm very pleased with youre fic! There are hardly any (understandably) and yours was rather cute in an erotic, food fetish sort of way.
FireCookie chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
this is awsome time Ive read made the pairing appealing :D

keep up the good work :)
harleydayenara chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
That was severely inappropriate -nosebleeds- and i think i might be sick...but lol your an awesome writer! i sivered the whole time...well anywaay it was cute...but lol Link is so not one of my fav in Man. u help me see hummor in him though _
eternaltorture chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
That was so cute.

I really like the story XD And damn, Allen is just too erotic *nosebleeds*
Fallende chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
I can guarantee you that Allen would NEVER do anything like that. Ever.

It was too OOC-ish for my liking. D

None-the-less, the writing itself was pretty nice.