Reviews for Unlikely Hero
Guest chapter 24 . 2/13/2016
Noooooo!You cannot let this go unfinished. I will sic Sylar on you. I wasnt sure about this story with it being written such a horrific gang rape and other claire torture scenes. But i have taken almost a week reading this. Wow. Great, suspenseful. I cried when you "killed" sylar. What a journey of pain, regret, healing, trust, fear, darkness, both psychological, a b d emotional. Please continue. I am 47 and a teacher. I have proofread/beta read frequently. If you still need a beta, I would gladly help. Please don't let this go!
annaleafe chapter 24 . 1/13/2016
Okay. I just wanted to let you know, I love this story. I've read up to this point about 10 times.

I'm really sorry about all the personal stuff in your life. I hope things are somewhat okay now. If you ever continue this, I'd be thrilled, but I get the personal life side of things.

Love and prayers,
Shellbean chapter 24 . 9/8/2015
Hello Joise,
If I hadn't had to work I would have finished reading these chapters ages ago. I want to thank you for writing this story and I hope that life is just happening for you and that you plan on writing more until Clare and Sylar get their happily ever forever. I will be looking forward to more chapters. Again thinks for writing and I hope all is better than when you were writing this current chapter. Sincerely a big fan of your writing. Shellbean
SETO-KAIBA-LIFE chapter 24 . 12/30/2014
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH poor sylarand peter ,they are having a hard time ,DAMN YOU NOAH )X

I can't wait for next chapter
River4Jayne chapter 24 . 12/2/2014
I lack the words to properly sing your praises as much as you deserve for this story, I love it so much - it's just fricking amazing.
I'm very sorry about the struggles you've been through recently, and I find it amazing that you were able to put together that last chapter after everything your family has been through. You have incredible strength and are such an insanely talented writer xx
emmaleewhittaker chapter 24 . 11/29/2014
OMFG please continue
emmaleewhittaker chapter 8 . 11/26/2014
This chapter had me in tears it is so emotional I love this story its so perfect thank you
chronicyouth chapter 24 . 5/1/2014
luvrblu chapter 24 . 4/25/2014
This is a terrific story please update soon.
Guest chapter 23 . 3/13/2014
You've even got PETER defending that monster. SIck, sick, sick!
Guest chapter 24 . 3/13/2014
Yeah, the first problem with your story is, if Claire is "immortal", there's no real danger to her life.

The second problem is, you don't think Sylar is a bad guy. That's just sick.
Guest chapter 12 . 3/13/2014
Sylar is nothing but a murdering psycho. He has no heart, he has no redeeming qualities. The fact that Claire would care for him after he tried to kill HER, and DID kill her father, is about right, though. Claire is an idiot.

I cannot understand why people ignore who and what Sylar is. And pairing them romantically is just flat out sick.
reina13 chapter 24 . 2/21/2014
Not bad
Casey chapter 23 . 10/22/2013
Great chapter! So glad you're still writing this story.
pepperxxx chapter 23 . 9/27/2013
I love this story. partly because its really good and partly because I have a crazy Italian grandmother too!
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