Reviews for A little of your time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Meh. i think it's alright the story stopped here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, great story! Even though unfinished, it leaves off at a point with some closure on angst and open to good outcomes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found and read this…please finish it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dear Serpentina: Just thought I should mention: At one point when Dumbledore's telling Snape about Hermione's third year, your favorite plot device seems to have inadvertently become a "Timer-Turner". (Much less impressive, I think you'll agree - unless there's also a slot in the "Tough Guide" for stories about wizards turning egg timers over.) You may want to fix that. Sincerely, Qoheleth |
![]() ![]() Very enjoyable story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think all hope is lost that this will ever be updated after such a long time, which is really sad because this was such a good story. Great plot, on-point character writing, slow-build romance... all to my liking. I really would have loved to see how their relationship develops further, and most of all, what it would be like once she returns to her own timeline. Whatever, thanks for writing this, I enjoyed it very much. Wherever you may be now, I hope you are well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you continue |
![]() ![]() It is nice so far, but small inconsistencies bug me a little. For example, if Hermione knows about the shack incident, then she already knows that Pettigrew betrayed them all, it is hard to believe that she would not remember that and behave herself with him as if nothing happened. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, i hope you finish this fic, pleaseee |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope that you are continue this history! I am delighted with the direction that history is taking! |
![]() ![]() Wtf man post |
![]() ![]() TBC my arse :( God I hope you find the inspiration to continue thiis one day xxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just read this and loved it! Did you ever finish it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() uiiiii... I just read the fic and I can't stop... It's soooo good... please continue writing.. I definitely would love to know how it all ends️ please.. |
![]() ![]() Oml I just read this and it ended on a cliff hanger and I'm so upset |