|Reviews for Modern Pride and Prejudice|
| newworldwriter1 chapter 3 . 4/2/2010
hm... a sorta odd place to end a chapter if you ask me. As for a suggestion, if you wann a make a chapter longer, try adding dialouge, especially between Darcy and Lizzy, because your chapters seem to fly by and dialouge slows things down a little :) keep going! :)
| newworldwriter1 chapter 2 . 4/2/2010
Alright. hm, just as a suggestion, because this chapter was kinda short, i would have combined this chapter with the last part of chapter 1, probably after Darcy kisses Lizzy. :)
| newworldwriter1 chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
it's pretty good. i think it would be a good idea to mention the setting in the begginning though, as finding out it was set in CA kinda threw me :)
| Ashyka0o0o0 chapter 2 . 8/6/2009
hope to see another chpt.
| arya19 chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Great! I love your ideas.
But I think you are too quick: you develop your ideas not enough and I am a little frustrated.
I want to read more, so please continue...
A piece of advice: you should post your story in the 'Jane Austen' part: more people read this.
(Sorry for the mistakes, I'm French)