|Reviews for Unwell|
| Emily J. Redbird chapter 89 . 3/1
I have spent the last couple of weeks in the company of Harry, Severus and Gik, and it is time well spent. When I first started reading your story, I was sceptical. I always am, because the quality is very mixed on this site. But as I read on, I found that my scepticism was unnecessary. I love the way you take your time with this story, that you let it develop slowly on its own terms, and I feel as if I know your main characters very well indeed. On the other hand, this story is not just long for the sake of being long, it makes me feel that every chapter is justified and has its own function in this story.
Though the reason I came to the story was to see the interaction between Harry and Severus, and though I was initially annoyed that so much introduction was needed, I quickly found that though those chapters were marginally tedious to read, I now have a much firmer grip on Severus' personality than I, and maybe you as well, would otherwise have had.
Your characters seem very human and likeable, some more than others, and I can honestly say there are no truly evil characters in this story (maybe except for Nigel Mering, but who's counting?), and that is an amazing quality in itself.
Combined with everything else in this story, it makes a fantastic way to spend your time, and I genuinely thank you for sharing and writing such a spectacular story. Know that I will be waiting with bated breath for the next chapter.
Greetings from Denmark,
| GriffNoir chapter 89 . 2/27
This fanfiction is... uh. It's all. This fanfic, when you read it, you NEED to know the sequel. Not because you want to know how it ends, or something else, but 'cause you can't just stop at any moment. Just no. It's impossible. And you read and you read more, and it's awful and...
The end of the first book. This moment, when you sees the glimmer of hope...
Okay, when the Weasleys called Harry to talk about Ginny, I thought it was Neville, the Pureblood. It's stupid, okay, but- Wah ! Nathan ! In my face. I can't. It's horrible.
Beautiful (No. Awful.) story. In hoping you're going to post the next chapter !
| Rosa chapter 89 . 2/6
If the last link doesn't work. Go to my DeviantART - RosaZaira and find the piece called 'Monster' in my gallery! ;)
| Rosa chapter 89 . 2/6
Well that was phenomenal! Best piece of 'Snarry' fan fiction I have read for a while. I say Snarry, but really this story has much more depth, following the life of Severus and his sanity... Incredibly written, enthralling, found it near impossible to put down for a second. Took me three days to get up to date! I really hope you don't abandon this story. I would be absolutely devastated!
*cough* I actually drew some fan art...if you are interested...
| Miss Nailia chapter 89 . 1/25
amazing story, so very original and it made me into an emotive mess... lol i hope you'll be updating soon
| darkdranzer chapter 3 . 1/24
...while the idea itself it intruging the way this is written out is quite illogical. I doubt the aurors have total power over the death eater trials nor would Harry/the other teachers just let them haul Snape away like this.
| JM0RIARTY chapter 89 . 1/22
hey are you still writing on this story? Or did you abandon it because RL got to busy? I hope not as it's one of my favorites and I would like to know what happens next.
| excessivelyperky chapter 74 . 1/14
Good chapter. And it's awful that Harry had such a rotten childhood (though why he isn't blaming Dumbledore for leaving him there, I don't know)-but Snape had a totally rotten life; ugliness at home, persecution and hexes at school, with absolutely no friends, and then his horrific life during the War, never mind his betrayal by the Light afterwards.
Here's hoping that Harry protects Snape from Lucius, though.
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/13
Oh HELL to the no if I EVER saw that happen I would raise Hell. Slace indeed what is this tge 1800's. Lucious is a bastard inbreed whos mummy is also his aunty.
| RozaHelenClary Sardothian chapter 89 . 12/8/2013
Hello, i am a new reader of yours and have been reading this story for around three days. I cannot help but notice that you have said you always have written chapters in advance, but despite this you have not updated since July as it is now December i cannot help but hope that 1. You are well and not dead and 2. That you are just waiting for the right time (which is now) to upload and i suppose 3. You have a busy social life (an idea i cannot possibly imagine), however i do wish for you to update soon as i do so want to read the ending of this marvellous story. I remember in high school in history doing slavery and not really taking in or having any thought to how slaves must have felt or been treated or how they would have reacted to suddenly being free and having to make decisions and such. Your story has impacted upon me a great deal and i live to know the conclusion to it... Now i am off to search your profile for more of your stories i want to read! :)
| excessivelyperky chapter 72 . 11/28/2013
Very good chapter. Harry's lucky the house didn't catch on fire or some other emergency while he was dead to the world, Snape confined to his room, and Teddy unable to help himself.
And he is very lucky that Hermione is there, who has been through just as much as he has.
Harry needs a) a house elf and b) therapy.
And he still needs to read the manual of how to be a slave owner...
| S.K.Y cyrus chapter 89 . 11/12/2013
Adorable couple, love your way with words!
| catselfin chapter 89 . 11/9/2013
Please, please don't abandon this beautiful story. And please, let there be a happy ending, too. Looking forward to your update, my dear...
| SSF88 chapter 89 . 10/22/2013
Hi there! I'm a new fan of this story. I Have just started reading it a couple of days ago. I absolutely love it! You are really talented, and it is a joy to read. I can't wait till you update again!
| Athena Keating-Thomas chapter 89 . 10/17/2013
Wow! This is one heck of a complicated, detailed, thoughtful, and well written fic. I'm glad I finally found it.