|Reviews for The Masque of the Red Death|
| iamawickedchild chapter 2 . 8/27/2009
OMG! wow! this is amazing! i think my jaw is still on the floor after reading this!
wow! This Edward is turning into one of my favorites!
| SandytheSandstorm chapter 2 . 8/27/2009
Thank you so much for alerting me that you had posted another story, another chapter. Indeed an honor. It is because of the second chapter or first I read this morning that I understand the Prologue. Edward has been stalking her so to speak, in Phoenix to get her to Forks. There will be no hurting her. FINALLY that Lauren, of all the stories I have read, gets what she deserves.
And you say this isn't going to be a love story. Well I love it.
You are truly amazing. Your way with words is truly amazing, a flavor of olden times when everything spoken was poetic. Sexy no erotic, no words to describe it
| sakari-x chapter 2 . 8/27/2009
Buh Bye, Lauren, you skank! Lambie, this story is so good! Dark dark stuff, and I love it! The shoelace thing was a nice finish. Thanks for the update!
| FantasyMother chapter 2 . 8/27/2009
Goddamn, and they say *I've* been mindfucking with the characters. LOL
Excellent job and beautifully written!
| KnoKnayme chapter 2 . 8/27/2009
o love this character...very driven!
| Lisalove83 chapter 2 . 8/27/2009
DAMN! This is badass! LOL
Can't wait to read more!
| Reader.Megan chapter 2 . 8/26/2009
oh fuck, this edward scares the shit out of me.
...but i love this story! more please :)
btw i love the length of this chapter.
| pixievamp08 chapter 2 . 8/26/2009
oh my god. gruesome, gory, scary as hell...
I LOVE IT.
| Linds14 chapter 2 . 8/26/2009
Yes, definitely be nice to everyone around you! haha...actually, not that it really mattered here. I mean it did target her for Edward..but she could have been chosen to die on a whim as well. He doesn't care.
Just like Renee's death was used to titillate and tease Bella.
Will there actually be real love in this story? haha..I just don't see how Bella could grow to love him. And why her? I really want to know how he found Bella..and what does he really want from her? To tease/torture her til everyone around her is dead and then finally kill her?
| Litany Gone chapter 2 . 8/26/2009
thanks for the update
| Modern Audrey chapter 2 . 8/26/2009
Gross. In a very good way, of course;) But so short! Please update soon.
| nounbeast chapter 2 . 8/26/2009
So much AUUGGHH (which from someone like me is like LOVE 3) that I cannot begin to articulate. The way he seems to think death is an appropriate punishment for so much as needlessly bitching at Bella... oh shudder.
"For now she cried for her mother; waking in cold sweat, terror outlining her brow. She may not have known it, but the nights were ours."
This is my favorite bit!
(Also the shoelaces! Way to add a whole new layer of Horrorward there!)
| danireviewsthings chapter 2 . 8/26/2009
Poor Bella. Even if Lauren was a bitch, its still a death near Bella. Right at her feet, for that matter. Its as if Edward thinks Bella is an ancient goddess that requires human sacrifices.
| nitsuAPJ chapter 2 . 8/26/2009
Is that... Edward? fuckfuckfuckfuck!
| swimmer07 chapter 2 . 8/26/2009
Does tripping myself count?
The Red Masque of Death is my favorite Poe tale ;)
I really like the devilish side to this story. It is quite enthralling.