Wow.
I LOVED this. Normally I don’t like the big ending of ‘declaring my love publicly into a microphone’ but the way Lily responded was just perfect (laugh-crying). This story was soooo gooood. I’m both happy and sad it is over. What a great fanfic!

I’m just confused as to why they wouldn’t mention to Dumbledore that there was duel going on, where nott used an unforgivable. Why did lily just forget about the prefect and the first year?

EEEEE I love this chapter! *happy dance*

So many emotions! Oh my gosh. Best chapter yet! I can’t believe... that was ingenious

Ahhhhhh it’s getting intense now!

LOL! When Lily told everyone her first kiss was Snape! James laughing a little “desperately,” hoping it isn’t true... taking it as a personal attack/insult. I’m dying I’m laughing so much!

This is really good!

Wow that was really good

Really good, I am just confused on what happened at the ministry and with her parents

I love this fanfiction! I mean each moment in this fic is priceless. I have never even read a jily fan fiction so amazing. Plus the other characters are also really well developed. I love all the references you make and the ending is also sooo perfect. I'm gushing so pathetically right now

Great chapter! The dialogue is realistic, and thanks for writing this!

OH MY GOD
and to say that to severus' FACE... HAHAHAHAHHA

I don't understand... I thought that they were supposed to be TOGETHER!

i love it... lily and james forever

I have no idea if you're still active or check your reviews, but I just want to let you know that this is one of my favourite Jily fics of all time. And more than that, this first chapter has 2 moments that have stayed with me over the years (I've literally read this fic probably over 20 times in full)...

1) when James dashes in front of Lily, and she suddenly feels safe. I resonated with that scene so deeply

2) the last few lines, where she is thankful that James, impossibly arrogant, always seemed to have a way of knowing where she was

I swear, this is a staple for me in the Jily dynamic, and basically something I've committed to my own headcanon. That Lily could recognize that even if James was an arrogant bully, and could make her feel a lot of things, fear would never be one of them. It's such a strong opening chapter, and it only gets better, but I will never forget those 2 moments. I can't even really explain why, but I just think you really nailed it and they affected me.

Thank-you again for this fic. It's really amazing.