omgg this is one of the best fanfics ever. i stopped everything and was immersed in the story for the whole day. u made my friday better 33 i'm not sure if you'll see this comment haha its been 14 years since this has been published. But i LOVEE how u wrote james. He isnt submissive and stops putting Lily in a pedestal (it makes him extra hot ngl lmaoo). this story has a perfect mix of drama, fluff, and hurt comfort! when i tell u was screaming when Lily refused to admit her feelings for james and dumped him after a few days of snogging him, i was livid and that chapter prolly had the most amount of impact on me. Your writing is truly impeccable! i hope you write more jily one day :).

p.s the "and three more after that" broke me, did u really have to snap me back into reality like that omgg :((

Bloody fanastic!

I freaking love this so much!I keep reading it over and over!

I love this fic - I can really relate to how lily is in love with james but when she and james are havinv a moment she gets scared . That s happened to me .

Great story! 9.5/10

I read this so quickly.. This is amazing

I remember this being the first jily fanfic I'd ever read.
gosh now im sad.

This was such a sweet story! Thank you for sharing it.

I loveeeeeeeeeeeeee IT

Plss write more it is so good!

Omg your story belongs to a hall of fame of fanfiction. There was everything: action, romance, friendship, lots of drama, and a lot of explanation as to what could've happened before 'Harry Potter' books. I loved it soso much. I stayed way too late past my bed time to finish this but it was SO worth it
Thank you!

Really loved this, great job!

this story is so good everytime I re read it

Really good story! Cheers

fr this is one of my favourite stories. the banter, the drama, the fluff. you've done a lovely job with it 11/10