|Reviews for Legends, Part 5: City of the Dead|
| cabbyb111 chapter 9 . 11/18/2017
I started reading a week ago and I am hooked. what impresses me most is your changes you make, As great as resident evil is there is no denying the cheesiness of it all from plot to characters. what you have done is add so much character instead of the usualhe is bad she is good" that the games do.
You also have changed aspects of the plot which connect the dots and make it flow better while still respecting the source material.
A huge well done for your impressive work.
| mac chapter 6 . 12/5/2012
good story. the two shot pistols you wrote about are called derringers. just thought you'd like to know.
| Anonymus chapter 40 . 10/15/2011
Hey, cool story, but there's thing that is uncorrect
the virus only multiply in a living host and not exactly a living creature (no metabolism, just clone themself in a living host) unlike the bacteria
btw, sorry to sound geeky :P
| 2ndsly chapter 40 . 3/8/2011
This is horribly cheesy, but I just have to say it.
Umbrella Soldiers, you S is about to be Rd.
Still eagerly awaiting Lisa.
Great opening for this phase. I'm going strait on to the next.
| 2ndsly chapter 35 . 3/8/2011
Why is Jill blond? Did I miss something?
| 2ndsly chapter 33 . 3/8/2011
That was a good end for Irons, it suits the character you built him into.
| 2ndsly chapter 16 . 3/8/2011
In this chapter you kept saying three, when there where four squad members left.
| 2ndsly chapter 6 . 3/8/2011
The speed that the infection hit the city is a nice touch, explains how everything fell
apart so quickly and totally. I like the fact that Ada is not in her signature red dress.
| 2ndsly chapter 3 . 3/8/2011
My last review was a little 'out-there' because I waited until the end to review,
so now I'm gonna review anytime I have something to say about an event.
My introduction to RE was sometime between the ages 8 an 11, to my brother
playing RE2. At that age I couldn't spot the plot holes that seem so obvious now. So I'm
finding your changes to be fascinating as well as logical.
| cjjs chapter 40 . 6/9/2010
Well, it was one heck of a last chapter. I really liked the fight in the streetcar and Michail's last words. (I'm off to babelfish to translate them right now, lol)
Also I like how much jill has strengthened in the series, good so see her resilient side.
Anyway, take time, relax, drink a few pina coladas if you want. Whatever it takes for you to keep on writing such an impressive (and comprehensive) story.
| cjjs chapter 39 . 6/9/2010
Great chapter. You really managed to convey the "swarm" technique that the zombies use. And the decent into the tunnels and terse dialogue was very well done too.
| Sethlon chapter 40 . 6/3/2010
In a word; Awesome.
I like how you've molded Ada to fit in with your way the story is told; it really doesn't make sense that she's running around in a red dress during a zombie apocalypse, hehe. All of her chapters were very interesting.
Its also nice how Nemesis is much more of a destructive force...in the games hes described as being able to break a grown man in half without exerting half his energy, and its cool to see him actually doing so instead of throwing around weak punches.
| Starlight-Ninja chapter 40 . 6/2/2010
Sorry I didn't review the other chapters; I got caught up in something else. I like how you're starting to break from the games. It feels more original that way.
Have a fun summer.
| Leonid Ivanov chapter 40 . 6/1/2010
Whew... What an intense chapter! Amazing job you made there. Yet I kinda feel that the ending of this part a bit hasty. You stopped it right in the part where things are about to get even wilder. I thought you're about to end it when Jill's been infected by Nemesis (if you're planning to take this part into your story, since you've made quite enough changes here and there). Yet, still, this is without a doubt the best RE fanfic I've read so far. Can hardly wait for the next part. Again, great job!
| cjjs chapter 37 . 5/28/2010
Whoah, heavy chapter! I loved it. The pacing was awesome, starting with a frantic chase, a frenzied fight scene, and then a really gut-wrenching, final bit. Great work.