|Reviews for Wounded|
| beauty-always-had-a-cost chapter 2 . 1/25/2010
this story is amazing. its dark but it has meaning. and it shows that people who cut aren't just emo...there's a range of reasons why.
this is an amazing story and you have such great ideas.
keep writing please because i would love to read more!
love beauty-always-had-a-cost -.-
| regan chapter 2 . 10/4/2009
make another chapter! this is excellent!
| PBelmont chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
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| Melina95 chapter 2 . 9/6/2009
WOW! that was brilliant! Keep Writing, your doing frggin amazing! :) livgreen
| anonymous123 chapter 2 . 9/3/2009
i liked it :)
bit depressive thought but i suposse thats the whole point ;)
maybe you could make evie come back? or show her trying to get her life back on track by befriending new people? or she could move to a new school? and evie be their? i dont know
haha, anyway keep writing its good so far :)x
| Melina95 chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Wow, that's very good. I tried to make mine sound so...depressing, but, you got that perfectly. Almost like you lived what tracey went through. If no one wants the storey, You could write a chapter 2 about something you or one of your'e friends went through, It doesn't necessarily have to be around the " Thirteen " story line.
If you like my suggestion, please write to me. I want to hear what you have to say about that. Thank-you LivGreen