just remembered this fic from nostalgia...you're such a good writer. Congrats on your wedding! Its been 6 years and I still think about your writing...wish you all the best, xoxo

Again the naked thing. I really liked the story but I couldn't bring myself to believe sakura 'loves' sasuke in this story as except of petty jealousy she has shown no sign of loving him. She didn't even care about him , all she cared about what if he left her so no in my mind they are not end game in this story.

I want her to go to Sasuke with her own free will not after being persuaded by others.

I dont think Sakura should be with sasuke , I seriously think he deserves someone who genuinely loves him -karin. Sakura is a hypocrite and she doesn't love him .

Wow. simply wow the scene with sakura and karin. I like your bitchy sakura

The writer has an uncanny obsession with making naked sakura interact with every male or make most of her encounters sexual. Looks like some unfulfilled fantasies of yours are projecting here

I like how strongly Sasuke is reacting to the kiss cause in some stories sakura kissed gaara and he (her boyfriendhad no prblm and the writer then went on to say how her story is cannon-ish . Bullshit. Anyways THIS story is so intriguing that I cant seem to put it down.

Naked in front of everyone . Ew

oh god the amount of time I've read tan , its like the writer have an obsession with the word tan

I will respectfully ignore the Sasuke short hair line. eww

I remember loving this story back in high school. Hope you're doing well!

Love this fic! Please update

Congrats on your upcoming wedding! :) I really hope you will finish your story. Even though I was upset about some parts, overall I'm really enjoying it. I just wished you didn't put Karin in there. Well anyway, I wish you the best and hopefully you will come back to continue your story. I really want to know what is going to happen to Sakura and Sasuke, will Sasuke finally confess to Sakura that he's in love with her and make it clear once and for all that he never loved Karin? I hope so so much that there will be a happy ending. Oh please come back and finish your story. I have so many questions left unanswered.

I apologize for blowing up with my last comment I was just really upset. Although everything I wrote still stands, Sasuke never had sex with Karin in the manga/anime nor did he have any feelings for her, but I just wanted to say that was very nice of you to put your author's note in Spanish for those who don't know English very well. That was very kind of you.

I also forgot to add in my last review that you put in your last chapter that Sasuke and Karin were as close as him and Sakura so in other words in your fic Sasuke and Karin had sex because if they were that close like him and Sakura then that occurred in your fanfic. Well that NEVER happened in the manga/anime because Sasuke NEVER had any feelings for Karin. SO NO YOUR FIC IS NOT CANON!