I apologize for blowing up with my last comment I was just really upset. Although everything I wrote still stands, Sasuke never had sex with Karin in the manga/anime nor did he have any feelings for her, but I just wanted to say that was very nice of you to put your author's note in Spanish for those who don't know English very well. That was very kind of you.

I also forgot to add in my last review that you put in your last chapter that Sasuke and Karin were as close as him and Sakura so in other words in your fic Sasuke and Karin had sex because if they were that close like him and Sakura then that occurred in your fanfic. Well that NEVER happened in the manga/anime because Sasuke NEVER had any feelings for Karin. SO NO YOUR FIC IS NOT CANON!

First of all I'm really pissed off. Wtf?! Sasuke NEVER had any feelings for Karin especially NOT romantic ones. He always pushed her away when she tried to touch him or even get close to him. Karin was just a tool he used for his revenge against Itachi. She eventually just became a simple teammate to him and they sure as heck NEVER formed any type of bonds or relationship. All that stuff you put in your story about Sasuke having feelings for Karin is a bunch of BS because the real Sasuke NEVER had any feelings for her. I'm not even sure I want to finish reading this. That pissed me off so much while reading this chapter and to know that you more than likely made Sakura let it go like nothing and be charmed by Sasuke and let him touch her again is messed up :( So completely messed up!

This chapter was so hot and omg the feels were of the charts. I absolutely LOVED the sexual tension between Sasuke and Sakura. The tenderness and care Sasuke showed while he was washing Sakura omg ok let me just stop now before I get carried away LOL. Damn you are so amazing at writing this!

Sakura did give Sasuke incentive to stay back when he first left the village. She confessed her love for him and practically begged him to stay or take her with him. Sakura has always loved him so much.

Short hair definitely does not suit Sasuke lol. I can only picture/see Sasuke with his beautiful spiky long locks and his now beautiful lucious long hair :) 3

I have my fingers crossed that you’ll come back to finish this story some day. I always worried that something might have happened to you and that we’d never see your writing ever again. The world is crazy, you know? Sending best wishes for health and I hope you’ve been doing well since your last update.

hi :)
it's been 7 years since this updated, holy crap we're getting old lol. as someone who used to live on this site as a middle/high schooler and recently came back to read some of my favorite old fanfics in my now late-20s...I distinctly remember this story and how amazing I thought it was!

I don't plan on rereading it now, unless one day it becomes finished! lol but I just wanted to let you know that back in the good ol days you were one of my fav writers in this Fandom, and I still think about this story every couple of years when I venture on here again :)

Hope you’re doing okay! I see that you updated your bio in 2018 so i have faith that you might complete this fic sometime.

Say when is one of the most exciting fanfics ive read on fanfiction. Cant predict whats gonna happen next at all

Plot is really top 5!

So good! I hope you are safe and well. Please update when you can.

Hi I keep reading this over and over again and still it love it everytime! Your story has a unique story and a beautiful portrayal of the charcters. PLEASE DO NOT ABANDON THIS HUHUHU Please think about updating this story once again...

update pls

Why did you stop this? It is so perfect and good.
Please back.

Please update! Don't abandon this story because it is really interesting and well written so far; I can't wait to read what happens