Reviews for The Green Eyed Monster Comes Out to Play
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2019
9/10 not enough foreskin
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
This was the least sexyist one shot I have read revolving around sex and a dick. Horrible. You made Bella sound like a man who sits on the front porch of his run down double wide while sporting a mullet and wife beater sipping on some nati light. She was not funny at all. At all. I feel like you're a high school student trying to be cool and witty or an old person trying to be cool and witty. So not sexy. I just cannot. I skimmed majority of it in hopes it got better... It was just bad.
CSG chapter 1 . 7/26/2017
Love it!
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 7/26/2017
I know I read and reviewed this but, I can't find my review in here anywhere. This has to be one of the hottest scenes in the history of TwiFanFic. I read Nightingale Journals years ago and loved it. Maybe you had a version of this scene in that story? Perhaps that is what I am remembering. It is not everyday that you come across a syringe and a hoodie. ;)
Edward'sbby chapter 1 . 3/6/2015
Love this
Edlovesme chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
I love this Bella. Fun story thank you.
Reader-many chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
Holy hotness :) love it
Jenn1214 chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
Oh damn! This was hot and funny as hell all rolled into one. Loved it!
roxanne34145 chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
I read up to the point where you didn't not respect the billions of people that believe that "BABY JESUS" is the Lord and Savior and deserving of capitalization as all proper nouns in the English language, sad that Dr Edward Cullen a fictional character listed directly after you wrote "baby jesus"
gets that respect, shame on you!
chartwilightmom chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
unf! just unf! is there vid of the hoodie experiment?
awesome that it has been extended, will be reading!
tff000 chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
good )
midnitereader chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
This was funny and sexy and hot. I think that says it all. Loved it!
shaz308 chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
Looks like the beginning of a beautiful relationship.
dpennell007 chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
Very good! And now I see Dr. GEM's story has been continued. The Nightingale Journals been added to my ever expanding TBR list.
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
Loved this one shot, but LOVE The Nightentgale Journals!
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