|Reviews for Hellraisin'|
| bhoney chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
Wow. I'd missed reading this cuz I've been avoiding S4 and 5 fics, but I thought I'd give it a shot. I'm so glad I did. I loved this.
Love how Sam looks at Ruby and Dean and sees the differences there, how Ruby had said she was doing stuff for him but wasn't, and Dean did make the sacrifices without ever mentioning it.
I especially liked this: "staring down the jaws of Hell. Again.
For him." Great image.
Love this: "Last time Dean had said: “Let’s raise a little hell”. Guess he never thought he'd take it literally...
And the road had indeed been paved with good intentions." It is pretty ironic, glad Sam realizes it. And I loved the way you used repetition here. Really powerful writing. I'm favoriting this one!
| PADavis chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
Nicely done. Loved the repetition of For him.
| Merisha chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
Aw, that was an awesome drabble :D - raw with emotion and truth. Wonderful stuff :D
Hugs and luv
| KatyMM chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Very nice tag. I'm sure Sam has some serious soul-searching to do after all this!
| lunasgathering39 chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Excellent! Nothing like using Dean's words against him. _ So glad that bit finally brought them back together.
| CatBeist chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
oh very nice job, man I can not wait till next season :)
| Vampyvii chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Oh yes - all this is too true - Very well done!
| Micaiah chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
That is pretty awesome. Love the use of "For him" over and over. Great job.
| DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Yeah, I think that's exactly what they would have been feeling. Bev x
| Enkidu07 chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Love the last line. So true and I had never thought of it that way before. And your use of the word vortex, just because what a good word.
| Mad Server chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
I like the way you busted out the "road to hell" aphorism at the end. It really fit. :)
| 1983Sarah chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
Oh, really good job. So right there and in your face and raw with emotions and thoughts that Sam must be having.
| Twinchy chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
What an awesomely nasty interpretation of the proverb "to raise a little hell". *stares in shock*
I bet neither Sam nor Dean meant it this literally...
Well done, Liv. Sam's reflections are so sad. The poor boy will beat himself up over this for the rest of his life!
| CiZiwejes chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Great one over here.
The emphasis on For him numbers of time really gave a good impact to your fic. It sounded so right. And the thought that Dean caught another glimpse of hell, again, was genuine. Loved it! You're awesome!
| Swellison chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Wow, just wow. Very effective echo of "for him," nicely flipped from Ruby's lies to Dean's sacrifices. Not sure I like the point of view switching to Dean at the end, think it should've stayed in Sam's perspective. Still, overall, stunning.