Reviews for The Bet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I did not like this story much really. The start was okay but as it progressed I liked it less. Draco and Hermione week too ooc. Their friendship just ends like that because she and Draco get together even thigh at they watt Hermione was all for it and started the bet. Then honestly the part win Riddle was just weird and unneccessary to me and just too much. Not only that but the whole story was rather rushed. I am sorry and realize this sounds harsh but thought you would like my true opinion and not a sugarcoated one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg,I live in Drogheda! Way,cool! I love this story!So far! Keep on writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww. . . No! Why did it end? I'm just kidding, I'm not angry at all. I didn't see the thing with Riddle coming. Ah well, at least he's dead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I forgot to review this yesterday so I'm doing it now. This chapter was great. Finally someone is putting Riddle in the story where he is not voldemort. I hope you get what I'm saying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So this chap was a lil bit weird but I like it! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha! I can review! YAY! So, I know I told you my review already but I have something to ask. Is Riona's dad a muggle? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa...this is great! I cant wait to read more! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was great! Poor Riona, she should tell her that to F**k off! Maybe she should even run away or something. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cant wait for the next update! great job:] |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll say it again cause this time it's true. Here it goes: Draco and Riona sitting in a tree K-i-s-s-i-n-g! Hope you can update really soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know I say this a lot but it's true. This chapter was absolutely brill! I'm serious and not making it up! Draco and Riona going to the Yule ball togehter. Sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() He he he... Draco and Riona sitting in a tree K-i-s-s-i-n-g! Sorry, I had to write that. This chapter is awsome! Oh, I forgot to add the story to my fav's. I'll do it now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story sounds cool. Draco is such an asshole some times. Ah well... Going on to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i liked all 3 chapter however, i personally, think all the characters are too OOC. I mean, Herminone is nice and cheery however, she is somewhat monotone and even though she is good friends with Riona, i think she would be advising her that Draco could not be good for her but still give support. Draco is TOO nice. He is so post to be somewhat meaner then you have him. Draco isn't that nice to any mud bloods in the beginning. it's as if your making the characters too nice too quick. I think if you would have had a slower progress with all the HP crew and not such a good bound going on with your OC and Draco, this story would be better. Please don't take this badly, i'm just being honest and trying to help you improve your story. i hope to read your next chapter and some improvements |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it! :D aww i love seamus lol!:s |