|Reviews for Treating Her New Pet|
| Avenging Neko chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I'm not as into IxS either, but I liked the way you played the scene, heh. She'd totally see it as a dominance thing and feel superior to Alucard that she succeeded where he didn't. Baha. Poor innocent Police Girl
| manticore-gurl071134 chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
Excellent fic! And I have to agree with Crensler 's review.
| ScOut4It chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
Powerplay is sexy. I think it's an excellent one-shot; though I wish it turned into a mulit-chapter with Integra deciding that she wanted more from Seras than just finger licking ;) Maybe feelings could even develop, who knows?
Thanks for the story!
| Crensler chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
I thought it was a ver interesting take on the scene, especially how Integra struck me as the kind of person with such a dominate personality who would derive a sense of pleasurable power from having such deadly creatures at her command. OR maybe that's just me being a total nerd. Anyway, good work.
| Juno chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
Nice, more yuri . I really do like that Chapter, the way Seras was so hungry looking...
Story wise, quite good. Narration, descriptions. As far as I can see you've done nothing wrong with the story.
And do you really picture Seras and Intergra like that?
I didn't, I just thought: "YES, MORE YURI FOR ME!". XD
| Mistress-Neko chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
I actually rather enjoyed it.
You were able to grasp Integra really well, and bring her thoughts into the moment.
| kaylee catterfly little chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
hey john this was a great story. i loved integra and seras being kind of romantical. it is nice. ps. geuss what. i am lying in bed and a small black and white chewawa is curled up next to me he is warm and nice and it is the best thing ever. bye love kaylee.
| NickSparkss chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Yay, more SerasIntegra!
I've always liked this coupling... well, any meaningful yuri pairing, really.
But you wrote it really well.
Though it was a short scene, it really did hold a lot of weight in the story.
And I really liked the line about keeping a vampire as a pet, having one kneel at your feet and lick your fingers like an obedient puppy.
That helped show the master/slave relationship that they have.
All in all, really great oneshot.
But I do agree with... whoever said it before, I don't think this has to be rated M, I think rated T with a yuri warning in the summary would suffice.
| ahilty chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
Intersting take. Pretty accurate as well. I am pretty sure that Sir Integra does kinda see her vampires as more pets and less people. Easy enough with Alucard, he doesn't act like a human at all...
| Sammich Man chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Almost seems suprising to see you do a "Serious" idea of Integra and Seras. Normally, you'd do comedic attempts at it rather than a serious tone. It works out well.
Integra's dominance over the vampires is a good message of what was going on. Like Haissan said, it's a good re-telling of a small scene!
| Lion in the Land chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Well, well, you've been a busy boy.
Very interesting to call this 'Integra's' treat, even though Seras was the one, er, eating.
I completely remember this scene from the OVA - kind of hard to forget, I guess. But you took it to another level by giving us insights into what was going on in Integra's mind. Her getting off on the power of it seems very spot on. You did a nice job exploring that.
While this was a very intimate scene, you don't need the M rating. I think even a T is conservative, but then, I tend to push that T rating in S:VI, don't I? Alternatively, I could, of course, make some suggestions on how to truly earn that M rating...
| Haissan chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
There were several grammatical errors as well as typos and misspellings not caught by spell check. You might want to wade through it one last time to fix these small mistakes mainly because you have a great rhythm in this fiction and these mistakes take from that rhythm.
Interesting take on this, not everyone can sit there and literally retell what has been told without making it benign, unoriginal, and plagiarized. Taking this small scene from the "Hellsing" series and giving it the perspective you have takes your story above and beyond these retells.
I came across a retelling of Inego Montoya's Duel against Count Reugen from [u]The Princess Bride[/u] and I was very disappointed especially because I hate to give a poor review of another person's work. The author did not share any story that was not told by the book or the Movie. She was aiming at giving "fan-girl reactions" through the fourth wall's hole. They did so as graciously and gracefully as the kool-aid man does entering a room.
You gave a perspective and a direction for this. The motive was Integra's "Dominance" over Seras, excellent topic. I am very pleased and privileged to be allowed to read this work.
| Alastor Vega chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
You know its kind of funny when you watch the scene and they put on a background music that sounds porn like. And Integra loves to be dominate doesnt she. And I dont think this be m rated.
| Azure Zangetsu chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Nice of Integra to help Seras along her way to becoming a full-fledged vampire. Virgin blood really does hit the spot when you're coughing up your broccoli, eh?
Nice fic. For a colledge boy, you sure are churning out fics quite often. Always glad to see an IxS every now and then.
Always Entertained - Azure Zangetsu