Reviews for A Second Chance
cbac1990 chapter 1 . 7/21
Great Story! you totally deserve more reviews than you've got. thanks for sharing your talent!
Christine Danielle967 chapter 1 . 5/27
*jaw drop* This is...Cool!
peggy77 chapter 6 . 3/13
Hi, I loved this story so much that I just had to read it again! I had forgotten to favorite it the first time and have been searching for it for a while now. Well, back to the story now.
Random number generator chapter 1 . 3/3
"He is needed to revive Voldemort" in the next chapter.

Preserving timeline detected, lets run away.
Mentathial chapter 29 . 2/25
wow...this was just wow...and the opening for the sequel you left is amazing! It's like history repeating itself!
Potterformers chapter 7 . 2/15
Redneck alot of dialogue is missing from this chapter
MSgt SilverDollar and Snake chapter 24 . 1/14
This is as good of a place to quit reading as any. -Snake-
Nik1627 chapter 29 . 1/5
Amazing! Loved the story!
reddir chapter 29 . 10/21/2016
This was a fun read.

My only criticism is that you didn't seem to make much use of the extra abilities the 6 had from their rituals, at least not noticeably (although maybe it was implied?). It might have worked better if they were each fighting 5 or 6 of the toughest the villains had to offer at the end.
setokayba2n chapter 29 . 10/21/2016
Gah, just the best part! It could be good to at last increase a couple of lines, with the reactions as Harry tell them the story...
GeorgeTobor chapter 29 . 9/28/2016
Congratulations on a complete story.
GeorgeTobor chapter 20 . 9/28/2016
You seem to have forgotten about the curse on the post of defense against the dark arts.
Even if Snape did not "out" Remus something else should have happened.

Don't feel bad, Rowling made many mistakes like this.
GeorgeTobor chapter 13 . 9/28/2016
Albus Dumbledore is supposed to be a great wizard. But he is not even good.
He doesn't stand up to Fudge or do much about Tom or help Harry when he needs it.
The grand sorcerer let death eaters go free, let an innocent man go to Azkaban.
Albus is ineffective!
What was Rowling thinking?
Did she bother to think?
GeorgeTobor chapter 1 . 9/27/2016
Ginny a vampire, well it's different from gold digging bitch.
Now she a blood sucking b.


Well I'll find out whether she is a bitch or beauty in later chapters.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2016
Really long drabble of what is essentially a Mary-Sue story...
Painfully hard and long to read as there really is no real content to read.
Commendable that you bothered to write so many words. That's good, practice is how we improve. But this story is still pretty pointless. I hope at-least that it served to teach you something of writing and being an author.
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