| Reviews for Life's a Beach |
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   mshigezumi chapter 11 . 11/10/2009 Nice chapter I like how Cameron wants to do something to Riley and how slowly John and Cameron are realizing how they feel for each other. Keep up the great work! Can't wait for your next installment. |
| MementoMoriYB chapter 11 . 11/3/2009 Awesome chapter as usual! ] Love the part with Cameron wanting to bury Riley in the sand. The candy cane bath8ing suit made me lmao as well. ) Looking forward to Cameron playing volleyball *insert maniacle(sp?) laughter here* PEACE! MMYB |
| River2027 chapter 11 . 11/2/2009 Yay, an update! I was actually just thinking about this story a few days ago and wondering when you'd post a new chapter. Looks like my wish was granted! I love how you write Cameron's thought process in the first few paragraphs - very cyborg-like and yet human at the same time, which just proves how different Cameron is. "That depends on how fast she can dig out." Love it! You always have the best humor for Cameron that still seems so natural for her to say. "A very up person." I seem to recall a certain Hoban Washburn saying that line in a Firefly episode... :D Ah, I was wondering when Jesse would come back into play. And you've also brought back the beach volleyball girls. Ooh, can't wait to see what Cameron has in store for them, especially if any of them comment about John. Or if she just "accidentally" manages to hit Riley. :P Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! |
| Cptlatnok chapter 11 . 11/2/2009 Great chapter, update soon! |
| billionsofblue chapter 11 . 11/1/2009 Whoa...that last line makes me think Cameron has slmething up her sleeve...LOL:) Keep it up! |
| OMG It's Dave chapter 11 . 11/1/2009 Love the story so far, please update soon. |
| ElusiveSanity chapter 11 . 11/1/2009 your updates are always enjoyable! I absolutely love your Cameron. It's my favorite version of her! Totally hilarious. "Can we bury Riley in the sand". Best of all, her humor is believable and true to character. Love it. |
| acer-sigma chapter 11 . 11/1/2009 Oh yes the volleyball game should be interesting. Wonder how many times Cameron will be able to claim she accidentally hit Riley with the ball. ;) Interesting bit about Jesse having picked up an observer of her own. Not sure if you're indicating someone else, or the fact that Cam senses that they are being watched. |
| Renderer chapter 11 . 11/1/2009 Thanks for this new chapter! Too much Riley of course, but I guess that can't be helped... :) Waiting for the next one, as always! |
| The1Russter chapter 11 . 11/1/2009 I love the humor you interject in your story. Burying Riley in the sand; her red & white swimsuit makes her look like a candy-cane. I reread the story for that alone. Keep up the good work! |
| Kirirur chapter 11 . 11/1/2009 Nice chapter! It contains fun and further little development of Cameron selfawareness. I'm eager to read how the volley match will be. xD Hope to read you soon! |
| Sedgie chapter 11 . 11/1/2009 Yeah ! I love this one ! Cam plays volleyball ... oh god, bal could be a cannonball ! That will be fun ! can't wait for the next ! |
| olischulu chapter 11 . 11/1/2009 Very funny Chapter but im concerned about Jesse. |
| TK-MR chapter 11 . 10/31/2009 Hah, nice work. but *"..Let's go over and see if we can't join."* "can not join"? then what is the point of "go over there". :D Keep update! |
| ACCOUNT-NO-LONGER-IN-USE2 chapter 11 . 10/31/2009 Excellent chapter. |