Reviews for Life's a Beach |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have to give it to you, that was a good wrapup. Everyone was made better by the experience. Sarah was the least developed, though I think that you did the best job possible (I really dislike her character). A big thanks for finishing this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's it? Well I enjoyed the story very much but the end is a little bit loveless. After such a long time (I'm grateful that you updated and finally ended it) I have hoped for a little bit more... well more. Just a kiss with Derek and Sarah watching to see their reaction. Nevertheless it's a great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter, Logan! I'm very glad you decided to finish it! It really brought the story to an ending really nicely. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. You developed Cameron perfectly. Great humor and family dynamic. Even incomplete, this is one of the best. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so freaking much. You have made me so happy by writing these stories of yours. I love John and Cameron so much that I have been going around reading everything I can. |
![]() ![]() This story is amazing (I hope it's finsihed one day) and I want to say that you're an amazing writer and I appreciate all that you've written for us. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! this is so freaking good. The sexual tension between John and Cameron is wonderful. |
![]() ![]() For the love of all things Jameron, please update this. I think this is one of the best stories on the site and it doesn't deserve to be left unfinished. It's too freaking good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noo.. how can this not be updated or completed? It's so freaking amazing! I need to see John and Cameron finally get together! Thanks for writing this though. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not even a single hug? kiss? lol! PLEASE UPDATE THANKYOU! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Read the story again and just like the others, it's amazing. I hope that one day you hope finish it. Thanks for writing as much as you did. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story. I love this story so much... just wish it was finished. |
![]() ![]() This is a very good story. I just wish there were more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would love to see you return to finish this story (I lose track of my own often). Enjoyed the first 16 chapters very much. Badass John is always awesome, and I thought you handled all the character developments well. Derek and Sarah were obnoxious, but in the same ways they are on the show! You obviously put thought into everyone's personal motivations and it came across well. |