Reviews for The Mat
shaz308 chapter 3 . 7/17/2011
Nice story, look forward to reading more of your work, thanks.
shaz308 chapter 2 . 7/17/2011
Well now they're all set.
shaz308 chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Look forward to seeing where this one goes. Thanks.
HannaHElysE chapter 3 . 6/21/2011
Awh, I'm sad that that's all there is. If you ever think about writing more don't hesitate. :]

Hannah.
lilmssomething chapter 3 . 6/7/2011
Mmmm yummy rockstar lemons...

I really liked this short story - I love a bit of classic rock and I might just kinda have a thing for musicians. Bass players in particular.

Loved that Bella had the guys to confront him, and it was so sweet that he was washing her shirt. I'd be pissed that he shrunk it though!
lilmssomething chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
Love that Edward is such a boy when it comes to doing his laundry. So funny.

And Rose and the lingerie - classic!
lilmssomething chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Lmao at that awkward moment where the hot guy sees your nasty granny pants.
IzzyBabeFanfic23 chapter 3 . 5/20/2011
I love it!
Genevieveforfun chapter 3 . 5/4/2011
Ahhh. I love this short story. So cute. Thanks for sharing.
deranged-dreamer chapter 3 . 5/4/2011
i loved the "Edward drop your sticks and bang me instead"!

you should write some more for this
daphnie chapter 3 . 5/1/2011
Love it love it
tawelephant chapter 3 . 4/16/2011
That was so great!
DaniWithGreenEyes chapter 3 . 4/4/2011
awwww i wish there was more but it was a perfect short story!

i really enjoyed it!

you never fail to entertain :)
greenandblue chapter 3 . 2/28/2011
awww... sweet :) I used to go to a place like that late at night too.. but sadly, no Edward.. or even a Carmen.. just a creepy guy that read porn outside the front door lol
Team-Edward-Forever95 chapter 3 . 2/27/2011
please continue!
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