Reviews for Helpful smile
kivey chapter 9 . 4/9/2013
good job with this i cant wait for more
ABigAssMoose chapter 9 . 5/30/2012
I love this story! Its so cute! But it looks like youve discontinued it :(
Sorrowful Reaper chapter 9 . 11/12/2010
This is perhaps the cutest hanabi x naruto story I have read in my life. Good job
sabbath9997 chapter 9 . 11/6/2010
Thanks for the story is fantastic.

I hope the can continue soon

Greetings

bye
the naru foxxx chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
I like it
Graypdrink chapter 8 . 6/11/2010
huh was thinkin a sex scene
Graypdrink chapter 7 . 6/11/2010
Pretty good story so far, but really disapointed with how little the the Hyuga are doing to get Hinabi back.
Graypdrink chapter 6 . 6/10/2010
hmm wonderr wat hina goin do
Graypdrink chapter 4 . 6/10/2010
pretty good
Graypdrink chapter 2 . 6/10/2010
ah

neji has the seal how he become the leader
Graypdrink chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
not a bad start
sabbath9997 chapter 8 . 5/14/2010
This very good fic is, I'll be waiting for the next chapter,

But Chapter 9 has a problem, as half full not display the chapter, only half.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter,

see you later
Archie776 chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
i love this story hanabi and naruto make a cute couple. this story makes tears form in my eyes. ple continue this awsome work
Daiski chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
"Naruto was still standing where he appeared his eyes closed. He brought an arm across his chest and stretched a little. Naruto was currently 18 about 5'10 a little short compared to some of the other male ninja's. Yet his broad shoulders defined legs and arms made up for it. His hair has never been cut since he was 13 it was a little long but was still as spiky as ever."

LOL, are you shitting me. His hair would be more then a little long, it probably down to his ass by now. Please work on your over the top melodrama with stuff like that. God help me with what the rest of the story is going to be like.
daniel 29 chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
I belive its the quality of the smile in this case that endeers Naruto to Hanabi. Meaning that when Hanabi smiles it isn't a forced or cronic smile just a genuine smile that feels natural
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