Reviews for Before He Cheats
Daniel6 chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
You go girl! Now pull a "Girlfriend" & steal Ron away from Kim!
Daniel chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
Ohhhohhh! I love this song! Maybe it's just me, but maybe Tara will go to Ron. Never liked monkey boy to begin with.
Data Seeker chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Hi there

I have mixed feelings on this fic (partly cause I am not sure if what you did was creative or not in some areas).

The quality is good in many areas. Good narration, dialog, drama and emotion.

Tara, her ex-boyfriend, Josh are very two-dimensional characters, so you can go multiple directions with them without making OOC (unlike Kim or Ron who are very fixed). As for your portrayal, well I don't know what to think.

As for the story. it feels...for lack of a better word, incomplete.

This is what I think of the wholesome standards.

The language is clean.

Nothing is suggestively offensive.

No extreme violence or any other vile content.

As for the whole revenge thing, I am not sure. If the story is implying its OK, then there is a problem. If the story is just about a girl committing a crime of passion and not promoting crimes of passion, that's passable, though not much of a plot.

I hope this review brightens your day, though it was critical. God bless.

Data Seeker
BEAVIS86 chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
Sweet I could see her doing something like that cause I've always found that people are never as inocent as they seem she just did not get enough screen time to show that good story I liked it

As always good form
Midgarosormr chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
Badical story of revenge. :)
Sharper the Writer chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Very good use of a song to intertwine to what Tara was doing to Josh's car.

I'm guessing by a long shot that the brunette must be Bonnie.

Anyways, good one-shot

Thanks

Sharper