Reviews for My Downfall
toughascotttonballs chapter 16 . 10/23/2016
Wow this story is amazing! The angst, the mystery, EVERYTHING was just so well written! I know it's been a few years and hope nothing major has happened to you, because I would love this story to continue! It's so good!
MsKMJ chapter 16 . 5/21/2011
Wow! Please update soon!
NegligibleNaina chapter 15 . 4/21/2011
WHAT THE HELL? And Edward can't really say he was at an employee's house when he's the boss! Nooooooooo! Lol panic attack!
Mrs.Smiles chapter 12 . 4/4/2011
ooo! finally! I bet its Edward bailing her out!
NegligibleNaina chapter 11 . 4/1/2011
Oh shit.

That handsome bastard.

Continue please.


Oh and excuse the language :)
mariehs chapter 9 . 4/7/2010
Hmm, dunno who they are. I'm too tired to think right now;)

But I do know that I love this story! :D Keep up writing :D
I'm Not Writning Anymore chapter 9 . 4/5/2010
K, um, I think the guys are:

2. Miraculously Edward

3. Someone...

4. Jake
pumpkinborg chapter 9 . 3/28/2010
Seth, Edward, James, Emmett?

Anyway - Geat chapter, as always. Looking forward to the next one...
Just Another Pathetic Fangirl chapter 9 . 3/28/2010
I'm going to take a guess that bachelor number one is Seth. #2 has to be James. #3 is Edward, and the last one is a) Emmett or b) Jacob.

Awesome chapter! I can't wait to find out who is who, and the hilarity that will surely follow.
Just Another Pathetic Fangirl chapter 8 . 3/14/2010
Sweet chapter! I almost expected Jacob to call during one of Edward's and Bella's dinner work date thingys. But then, you left me with a cliffhanger you silly girl! I wanted to read more! I can't wait to figure out what changes on her 25th birthday!
pumpkinborg chapter 8 . 3/14/2010
How could you leave it there? *Growls* PLEASE update soon!
BookButterfly 323 chapter 6 . 3/14/2010
Awesome story
mariehs chapter 7 . 2/1/2010
Ohooh! I got a bad feeling about that missing supply caddy! Maybe I've been watching to much crime lately.. Wellwell.. I have a feeling that James took it.. Yeah..

Loved the way Bella knew Edward was in the room and they're greeting :)

I don't like Jake though. He's no good...
Tiggrmommi chapter 7 . 1/31/2010
Aw you didn't hafta gimme a shout out! I LOVE reading your story! Seriously! Thanks for sharing it!

Hm...wonders if there's more to the caddy disappearance than meets the eye...tucking that info away for later. I mean, it's likely she touched a pen or paperclip or something in it someone wanted her fingerprints...

Oh, I Can't wait to see what's up next!
Just Another Pathetic Fangirl chapter 7 . 1/31/2010
Cute chapter! Although, I really really really want to shove Jacob so far up someone's bottom end that he'll be eating leftovers. He makes me angry. Thank heavens for Alice!
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