Reviews for Superwomen of Eva: American Dream
guest chapter 9 . 8/27
I like the story , I want to see when it is present in nerv officially with the other children and the reaction of shinji , I hope that you update soon this fic is pretty good.
Dragonjek chapter 9 . 5/14
"I'm pretty sure that nobody's going to hold this against you"
Like hell they aren't.

"I think I'll go with that last option."
That's a mistaa~aake~!

I'm so glad that she's finally in Tokyo-3 now! We can finally get some Shinji/Mari interaction going on. Still, it was nice to see her develop from a fairly normal kid to the adrenaline junkie of today.
I'd really like to see what changes happen to Shinji as a result of interacting with her, and with what you'll decide to do with the dynamic between Child and Eva. I don't think Shinji ever imagined the bloody scent of the LCL as flowing lifeblood, rather than that spilled.
How is SHIELD's Eva so superior to those created by NERV? I mean, NERV has more funding, and the vast majority of it goes solely into making Evangelions even deadlier weapons.

I'd like to see Mari's reaction to seeing Unit 01-and I'm very interested in how Shinji's a bit protective of his Eva. Even if he doesn't have much pride in himself, I suppose he doesn't like people insulting his giant mother-cyborg demon mecha.
Dragonjek chapter 7 . 5/14
There's something that does make sense. The Hybrid Cannon.

If it can shoot through an Evangelion's AT Field, it could shoot through an Angel's. All they'd have to do is make more of them-they wouldn't even need to be on vessels as advanced as the American Dream-and NERV and the Evas would be completely obsolete.

The biggest reason Evas are needed is because they can cancel the AT Field. Most Angels can tank an N2 bomb to the face and only be mildly discomfited, if they even notice it at all. What it's taken to break through without Evas has required absolutely insane amounts of firepower that just could not feasibly be reproduced-like the power of an entire nation. Hell, when it came to dropping nearly the ENTIRE supply of N2 mines into Leliel (which was the amount expected to kill it), Ritsuko was still certain that Unit 01 would be alright.

If something can kill an Eva (ignoring the weakness of the power cable and just waiting it out), then it can kill an Angel.

By slipping the Hybrid Cannons to a few governments (or using them themselves, or any of a dozen other things), they could completely defang NERV. The Evangelion project would have no reason to get the massive amounts of funding it requires.

I suppose this might be explained in later chapters, but it looks like a fairly big logic problem at this point.
Dragonjek chapter 6 . 5/14
Why does Shinji smell so much like LCL? And why "powerful"? That... isn't something I'd normally associate with Shinji unless he's in Evangelion.

Although... if you're taking parts of Rebuild (like with Mari and whatnot), then I could certainly see him having incredible latent power.
Animating a powerless Eva and creating an AT Field out of pure willpower sort of gives that impression.
Dragonjek chapter 5 . 5/14
Learn martial arts just by watching them?

That IS fast learning!

Now... considering that she's 14 and American, I'm assuming she's already found porn?
animefan29 chapter 9 . 4/14/2015
Overall a good chapter with both funny moments and development for Mari. Knd of wish to have seen her with Shinji more but I'll take it.
Kael Hyun chapter 9 . 4/5/2015
Thank you for including Coulson's Team. They honestly don't get enough love from the fandom
reality deviant chapter 9 . 4/2/2015
good chapter
reality deviant chapter 8 . 8/2/2014
great to have this update
Quathis chapter 8 . 7/28/2014
Mari is having some fun and getting in trouble. That she inadvertently saves Shinji's life is a cool coincidence. I kept expecting her to take down the three cultists, especially since it was established that she's very capable of hand to hand combat. Guess she's the whole shebang instead of just the minions. Fun chapter to read. Until next time.
Mike313 chapter 8 . 7/28/2014
It's always nice to see you update something, and it's good to see Mari getting caught up in some action immediately, no matter how bad her luck had to be to make that happen.

I know I probably sound like a broken record on this issue, but I really do think you should pick up the pace. You're over 120K words and you just got Mari to Tokyo-3, after all. I know she requires more setup than most of the others, but still. At this rate it'll take you about a million words or more to get through the story.

Also, I have to say I'm really surprised Asuka apparently likes Maria.
animefan29 chapter 7 . 5/4/2013
Ouch, that was pretty harsh, though I suppose portraying Fury as the cold calculating bas****. And the Infinity Serum sounds like a typical DC plot device to explain why individuals who should be ancient are still young and spry.

One thing I still love is how SHIELD knows/suspects something is wrong with NERV, but are completely inaccurate in regards to what the end result will be.
Quathis chapter 7 . 5/3/2013
During Fury's rant against her for helping, I thought about how Steve would approach this, and the process I came up with was: 1. Act the good soldier boy 2. Sweet talk the medical head to getting himself made Fury's exercise coach 3. Pay the Colonel back in bruises and really long runs (50 miles sounds good). Either that or do pretty much what Mari did in argue the point. Very passionate section, even if Fury's side came across cold.

The omake with the MREs was an interesting idea on why they tasted so bad, cause mine, while bland and blah, never were "used kitty litter" level. But, yeah, MREs as old as you are can't be good. And I was hoping for the Samuel Jackson Nick Fury. Kind of who I was picturing and whose voice I heard saying everything. Now it's the one from the 90's Spiderman cartoon. And he's just not as cool.

Until next time.
Zaralann chapter 6 . 12/1/2012
Blitzstrahl chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
hmm Anno stated in a interview Mari is British dont that kind of fly in the face of her being captain america? wouldnt basing her off of union jack be better
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