This could be my most favorite story of yours so far. I adore these two characters. Actually all of them. But Jasper, my God. The best. Going on my favorite list. Thank you!

Every time I read this story I fall a little more in love with it. I also relive the soundtrack of my youth.

Oh my God I love this story so much. It hurts in all the right ways every time I read it. Ugh. Thank you so much!

You could end it here and I'd be satisfied.

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Every few months or a year, I go back and reread this story. Let me tell you, it always feels like the first time. Magic's still there. Just want to drop in and say hi, no matter if you're still writing for twilight or not. You're a great writer, I hope great things also come your way

even all these years later, this is straight up magic.

Fabulous. Simply fabulous. Indelible characters and story telling. Thanks so much for you creativity and effort.

.spectacular.

Great start. I'm hooked.

Love it, every last word.

Bravo! This story was so good that I need more. You touched my heart with the way Jasper loved Bella and how they realized the love they had for each other. Bravo! I will now go and find another one of your stories to read.

That was beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

I love this. It's a wonderful read.

This is an awesome story

High schoolers, man. The worst. Great story though, and I'm so glad you wrote it and that I read it :) Sweet ending.