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Guest chapter 1 . 6/24
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rc48177 chapter 5 . 5/19
In the Land of the Pigs the Butcher is King!
Guest chapter 13 . 3/1
so basically you're an entitled prick, it's your job to write the story and explain the characters, not the readers, you lazy faggot. kys
Guest chapter 19 . 1/13
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Vyctus chapter 19 . 10/21/2016
I love this story so far... And the ass chewing you give idiots. Lol.

I can't wait until you update again.

Vyc
MWRANDOM chapter 19 . 10/4/2016
Excellent work. A bit disturbing at times, but that isn't unusual for a 40K story. Thanks for sharing.
The Moose Knight chapter 7 . 4/13/2016
Two things, and only two things.

1). The nano-techno terminator future armor that can tranform on will.

2). Forced love story.
Azzzimoth chapter 16 . 3/25/2016
In this fanfic There is alot of rape and sex, now this is fine (if you doft count the rape part) this is something that you warned about at the start of the story BUT, there is man things you left out in the warning. Namley that Naruto will be forced to have sex with something whose left site is that of a women and whose right side is that of a very ugly man. Another things you did not warn US about is that Naruto will (unwilingly) get fucked by Temari with a huge strap-on White he is puttning is own dock in an extremly ugly and grotesqe women. THIS IS THE KIND OF SHIT YOU NEED TO WARN US ABOUT. If I knew Naruto would get fucked by a strap-on Then i would have NEVER reed your story.
JensenDaniels32 chapter 3 . 3/8/2016
Sucks
jarrell9634 chapter 19 . 2/25/2016
this has got to be one of the best, if not the best, most exciting, thrilling and excellent stories I have ever read on this website. The story, the characters, the love, the destruction, the death, the madness, and the sheer amount of fucking carnage is so very impressive, I love every single minute of it. I hope ya update soon. Best wishes to you.
Bombertank chapter 19 . 4/27/2015
update soon
Lord Hircine chapter 19 . 2/2/2015
One of the best stories I've read so far! Please update soon! From the beginning chapter to thus far has kept me entertained and just loving the story in general! Also good choice on adding warhammer 40k to naruto you made it work very well!
CMVreud chapter 16 . 1/28/2015
It seems like Naruto got... screwed. By Slaanesh no less.
CMVreud chapter 14 . 1/28/2015
'Finkin' dus still needs moar DAKKA... an' a propa WAAAAAAHG!
CMVreud chapter 13 . 1/28/2015
Yaaay! I hope the chaos bards will play "mass-Inspire" again.
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