Reviews for Legend of the Abyss Refined
WildfireDreams chapter 4 . 10/20/2010
Very interesting, can't wait to see what happens next _
Windraider chapter 4 . 5/13/2010
OH please no anyone but that mary sue character off yours, I only started reading this fic because i was hoping that you won't have that mary sue character of yours again.

I swear if you put that character in, I'm immediately going to drop reading this fic.

You ruined a potential fic like the first version because of him, don't make the same mistake again!
Draketh chapter 4 . 4/18/2010
Nice plot thickening and hope to see more! Really keep up the good work you got an amazing story here and I see potential! keep it on!
River chapter 3 . 12/2/2009
So far, so good. Senel's out and still protecting everyone. What the hell is Jade going to do with that darn kid? In the meantime, Chloe's lost it and Moses shall be hopping mad about all this. I wonder, though: how are they going to react when they discover each is from a different world? I know who's gonna react: Jay, Jade, and Will. ...Come to think of it, what would happen if Jade, Solon, Jay, and Sync were to be in the same room together(no weapons!)? Insult matches, anyone?
Draketh chapter 3 . 8/27/2009
Liking the story and indeed is much better done than the previous done if so I might say, waiting for more. Till now the story seems to be going to be a hell of ride considering Senel with Jade hanging out and Luke with Norma, cant wait for the surname he is going to get, good luck!
XxXInuyasha's Little AngelxXx chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
i've already told you but yes,very good idea you have here :]