Reviews for The Misuse of Magic
Guest chapter 5 . 6/26/2017
Harry: 9 (Not evil, but quite moody)
Dumbledore: 5 (Not really evil, but very manipulative.)
Snape: 6 (Not evil, but he treats Harry horribly due to a grudge against a dead man.)
Lucius: 3 (He cares about his family, but not about anyone else)
Draco: 6 (Not evil, at least yet. Spoiled child who need a wake-up call)
Sirius: 8 (Not evil, but he needs to grow up. Extremely loyal to Harry)
Bellatrix: 1
Petunia: 1 (To treat your own nephew like she did...)
Vernon: 1.5 (Same as Petunia, but at least they aren't blood.)
Ron: 7 (Not evil, but he needs to grow up and stop being jealous of Harry.)
witchsbroom chapter 5 . 4/17/2017
Hi, Just found your story and find it interesting. Looking forward to seeing how Severus is going to get out of Azkaban and get rid of Bella also. below is my rating
Harry 10, Dumbledore 5, Snape 5 Lucius 5, Draco 7, Sirius 8 Bellatrix 1, Petunia 3, Vernon 1, Ron 5

You didn't mention Remus but if you do he'd be a 10
Guest chapter 5 . 3/23/2017
I think to warp a character such as Lucius Malfoy to the extent you have needs MUCH more groundwork. He currently has NO motivation to cooperate with Dumbledore. He didn't have the motivation in cannon until he had everything stripped away. His corruption is so pervasive it reminds me of the proverbial Biblical needle's eye (camel's gate) whereby the camel must have everything stripped away from him before he can get into the city walls. If we are to have any faith in your story this groundwork needs to be extensive and complete. He isn't like an O/C that's character can be developed throughout the story. The same applies for Dumbledore or any of the characters iyou mention if you wish to alter their character. It is my opinion that you are WAY TOO FAR along in your plot line to start willy nilly altering your character's personalities as your note would indicate. That's a problem you have in fanfiction. You get the characters with all their baggage. Changing them is okay with me, but you can't just dump on them where ever you please if you wish to maintain any integrity (orderly progression and development not right or wrong) in your story. Look at the Robert Ludlum series books. The later novels have been written by a new writer. He gets Jason Borne and the rest with all their baggage and must keep them in character unless they have been prepped for the change.
Style1234 chapter 5 . 3/23/2017








Vernon-1 evil

Ron- 10 kind
Guest chapter 5 . 3/23/2017
Harry 5

Dumbledore 2

Snape 5

Lucius 6

Draco 7

Sirius 6

Bellatrix 3

Petunia 1

Vernon 1

Ron 3
Fallow53 chapter 5 . 3/22/2017
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Guest chapter 3 . 3/22/2017
IF Dumbledore gives her ANY money it Better not be from Harry's Vaults, plus that sums OUTRAGEOUS! They don't even deserve a fraction of it. Vernon only dead bc THEY kicked Harry out so it's ALL on them and Harry has NO reason to feel guilty.
Fallow53 chapter 4 . 2/28/2017
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Child of Dreams chapter 3 . 2/28/2017
I thought Snape's father was a muggle named Tobias...
James Birdsong chapter 3 . 2/27/2017
Great tale
Darklight-phoenix chapter 2 . 1/22/2011
woah woah woah woah woah...get bella? out of prison? Ikkkes, i hope severus does it without trouble

update soon
bookslug chapter 2 . 2/14/2010
Oh, cool :) you were definitely right when you said the chapters would get longer. I am definitely going to keep reading this.

Definitely continue.
PandoraSilk chapter 2 . 8/22/2009
Wow, what's going to happen to Snape now, and Harry!:O

Please update soon, you left us with a cliffie.
Bonomania chapter 2 . 8/17/2009
O I'm liking this so far :] I look forward to more.
JWOHPfan chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
Oh you must continue this story, it started off quite nicely and has promise!
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