Reviews for Broken Strings
TwilightMundi chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Hm. I'm not sure about this story. It has some good parts, but the premise is so far-fetched as to be almost annoying. And the writing isn't great. Some contractions would make for more comfortable reading.

I have to say, though, that this story has the best break-up scene I've ever read.
tawelephant chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Love it love it love it!
twilightnaley19 chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
awesome job on this! i loved this oneshot.
rcole721 chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
That. Was. Awesome! :0)
esthermarie chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Good job my dear. I liked the song you used! Very sad and really excellent! I hope you win!

Love ya! :D
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