Reviews for Being a Veela's mate |
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Lewis James Potter chapter 7 . 5/23/2024 Draco and Harry are in same year or did i miss something? Love the story through |
HetaPhiPuffPrincess chapter 1 . 1/7/2024 Ok eww, i wanted to read this but this is so OC and AU that its disturbing. There is also brry little if any context and we basically have Draco actung as if hes Harrys father. Not to mention why is harry starting Hogwarts early? And only 11 in 1993? Like this isnt even a timeline that makes sense. Even if u wanted to say he started early he would still be 13 in 1993 or 12 going on 13 and so would Draco. So Draco acting as if he’s thing 20 year old Dom is a strech. Not to mention the dact that hes being a dom to a child. U dont find that oh I dont know creepy, disgusting, a tad preditory. Because lets say he started early even so did Draco? Is Draco 11 and if so, why is he storming the hall lile hes snape . Sorry thought i could read this but cant and i know its just my preference imnsure ur a good writer but ur ideas make it aound like u like child sex slaves or parent child relationships with in a romantic relarionship and thats just eww. |
Mikazuki0605 chapter 1 . 3/10/2023 Reviewing this story for the 3rd time, this continues to be very interesting. The plot of Harry as a young child bride is set up in a way that I have rarely seen, but I really, really loved Harry and Draco 竹马竹马 |
Lullz93 chapter 83 . 12/27/2021 I don't know what to say. Wow, just wow. Thank you for writing this. I loved it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/22/2021 well darn, humiliation within relationships is my no-go. I personally find nonconsent spanking a massive disrespect. Glad it was in the first chapter so I knew to stop reading. |
WellIWannaDie2 chapter 17 . 3/12/2021 I don't get the fact that Harry has no 'right' to oppose Draco. It seems like Draco's his controlling parent and Im not good with controlling people. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2021 Fs |
Dhaniel Grayson chapter 75 . 12/31/2020 Why in the name of earth that draco kissed gabriel willingly? Ohhh myy |
Kirah14 chapter 83 . 10/9/2020 ...absolutely wonderful story im elated to find this finished gem3 |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/12/2020 Tk |
Idetta chapter 43 . 7/12/2020 LOVED IT so far. So very detailed and sweet. However, too much detail could get in the way of the developmemt and get annoying |
llamartina chapter 7 . 3/9/2020 Wait aren’t Draco and Harry the same year? |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2020 Have you even bothered to have read the books? It’s doubtful Harry would subject himself to emotional and physical abuse like that. |
pile of crap chapter 83 . 11/9/2019 "AARRRGHH!" Malfoy woke with a start, sweat covering his whole body. A dream - no a fucking nightmare! - like he'd never had before! Fancying Potter! SHAGGING POTTER! He needed to owl his mother and organise a mind healer to meet him in Hogsmead this coming weekend. Fortunately it was only two days, but still. He briefly considered if some potion or a substance had been slipped to him at dinner? Unlikely as the house elves would never allow it. He knew better than to ask Snape for any assistance. Chalk it up to experience and NEVER tell his father was best way to go. Despite multiple sessions with various mind healers, Malfoy could not throw off the recurring dreams until end of school year. He'd ended up a nervous wreak as even Pomfrey's dreamless sleep potions refused to work. They were vivid, detailed, varied and oh so bloody realistic! He was listless, hardly slept and failed half his end of year exams. It had taken most of his father's influence, calling in multiple favours and a fifty thousand galleon contribution to the schools muggleborn education fund to keep him with his year mates. Having to repeat a year would mean so much loss of face, as to be fatal in Slytherin political circles. That rage in his father's face - and him snapping his cane in half - when stood in headmaster's office as Dumbledore exceeding politely suggested that muggle fund donation, would never leave him. IF this continued next year, he'd find himself at Durmstrang before christmas. As it was he expected extreme punishments from father during two month summer holidays. And of course Lucius Malfoy's punishments were nothing to laugh at. While nowhere near as pain inducing or sadistic as his aunt's famous rages, the prospect of facing those subtle paternal tortures made his blood run cold. It was ALL POTTER'S FAULT! But the Gryffindor had ignored him since before that first dream. He couldn't imagine that stinking scarhead keeping silent if he had been involved? Mudblood bitch Granger wouldn't break the rules like that and Weasel was too stupid to accomplish anything so subtle. Draco's problems disappeared during July and August at Malfoy Manor, but returned with avengeance after arriving back at Hogwarts. He was packed off to the Scandinavian school before beginning of October. Lack of rest, disorientation and nerves caused him to vomit on arrival by portkey. That had been quite an ominous start to his new placement at the institute. It didn't get terribly better. It took a further eight months to become free of those accursed dreams of being with Potter, kissing Potter, marrying Potter, HAVING POTTER'S BABIES and afterwards he never worked out where these perverse visions came from? He had a very mediocre academic career at Durmstrang's and left England for good after he graduated. The humiliation of bumping into any of his former Hogwart's schoolmates coloring his choice. His going bald at twenty didn't help matters - he put that down to stress of his father being chucked in Azkban and losing more than three quarters of Malfoy fortune to fines. Living in Austria he found some success as an exotic potions and powders trader. He never had any desire to marry, as any sexual contact with others made him picture Potter's face as they were in throws of passion. Those green eyes filled with potent list! Eep! And of course those visions were worse when he COULDN'T see Potter's face. Voldemort's feeble attempt to return in 2041 was crushed by The Order of the Eternal Phoenix and Dumbledore's Legacy muggleborn group's Horcrux neutralizers. Harry Potter's soul fragment having been removed years earlier at St. Mungo's under supervision of Hermione Granger-Weasley and her daughter Rose Longbottom. Harry frying the so called Dark Lord with a Muggle thermal lance was a final insult to Tom. As he turned it on Riddle's limbless body, it was rumoured the screams could be heard from outside the Shrieking Shack to other side of Hogwarts. Draco Malfoy passed away from a particularly nasty strain of dragon pox in his ninety third year. Bald, wrinkled, bent and with sunken features, his remains could've been mistaken for a very tall house elf. Only two extremely distant relatives attended his funeral, and then that was mainly to see if he'd left any gold. It was not to be, as what little he owned was eaten up by providing him with medical care in those last few years. (Fred and George's replacement of Draco's haircream with one of their more potent products was never detected. They smirked for weeks when the blonde ferret unknowingly packed up two full tubs when he left for Durmstrang! It was only revealed in 2136 at reading of the late Fred's will. Their nine hundred relatives and friends filling the Brighton & Hove Quidditch stadium pissed themselves laughing for almost an hour! Harry had to be taken to New St. Mungo's for the strain on his elderly chest, but recovered in a couple of days. For generations to come wizards, witch's & even muggles would go out of their way to taunt a large portrait of Lucius and his son, which still hung in a quite corner of the Ministry atrium. Icing on cake of this would often be portrait Draco hurling insults back or breaking down in hysterical sobbing - which incited portrait Lucius to smack him upside the head!) ## ## ## |
Guest chapter 83 . 9/15/2019 This is about the third time I am reading this and it still gives me joy. Good writing |