|Reviews for Sixty Hearts|
| Amberstinkbrain chapter 54 . 2/2
Crowy's dad is Deadfoot, not Onestar! And that is a a fact!
Also, here are two pairings for you. I hate both of them with a Passion, but here the are: JayxBright and JayxBriar.
| Amberstinkbrain chapter 6 . 2/2
Hahahaha the irony is killing me I'm laughing so hard!
So they ARE mates XD
| Guest chapter 60 . 11/20/2013
| Guest chapter 60 . 11/20/2013
Oh, I forgot. Daisy would also burn to a crisp and die. Berrynose would be nicer, and Poppyfrost would've died instead of Honeypaw. Brackenfur wouldn't have mated with Sorreltail. (He's too old for her and their perfectly perfect relationship makes me SICK!)
Yellowfang's daughters would've lived and taken Brokenstar
| Guest chapter 60 . 11/18/2013
That was really good! But if I owned Warriors:
Every cat would know tht Firestar is the greatest cat ever! Onestar, Ashfur, and Tigerheart would burn to a crisp and die! Ashfur would go to the Dark Forest and Bluestar wouldn't have chased Thistleclaw out of Starclan. Raggedstar wouldn't have treated Yellowfang like dirt, and the same goes for Brambleclaw! (He was a jerk to Squirrelflight!) Ravenpaw would've gotten his warrior name, and get a mate. Nightcloud and Breezepelt would die in a ball of flames, and Crowfeather and Leafpool would've gotten back together. Hollyleaf wouldn't have died and I wouldn't replace her with stupid, Mary-Sue Dovewing! Ivypool and Tigerheart would've gotten together, and Bumblestripe and Docewing would find love in each other. There wouldve been WAY more Half MoonXJayfeather in the Last Hope and Firestar wouldn't have died. I would have the annoying Purdy die in the tree fall instead of Longtail, and Blossomfall would've broken her back instead of Briarlight. Dawnpelt, or whatever her name is, would've died instead of Flametail, and Russetfur and Blackstar would've been mates. Foxheart would've died at birth so we wouldn't have to deal with her annoying and snooby behavior. Tallstar's Revenge wouldn't have been centered around, well, his revenge! Mudclaw would've become leader instead of stupid Onewhisker, and Leopardstar and Tigerstar would be a thing, and Pine and Sasha would mated. WhitewingXHawkfrost would've happened, and Birchfall would've died on the Thunderpath instead of Shrewpaw, and Ferncloud and Thornclaw would've mated. I don't no who Dustpelt would mate with, LOL! Firestar wouldn't have forgotten Skyclan, Princess or Ravenpaw so easily, Silverstream wouldn't have died, and Graystripe wouldn't have met Millie. There wouldn't be so many mistakes, errors, and typos in the book because I would hire an editor who would actually proofread! A Warriors movie would be coming to a theatre near you, and I would've specifified what color Scourge's collar was, and he would've killed his siblings, Ruby and Socks, when they came begging to him for mercy. Firestar would forget Spottedleaf completely and he and Sandstorm would live happily ever after. Firestar and Sandstorm would've had more kits, and Cinderpelt would love Littlecloud. Leafpool would've run away with Crowfeather and they would raise their kits together in peace. Sol would burn to a crisp and die, and Midnight the badger would have played a bigger part in the books. Whew!
| Guest chapter 47 . 8/13/2013
no i love these!make more!
| xXRainDaze.NiilaXx chapter 31 . 6/9/2013
That was so sad! Because know he dies. So sad... *sob*
| xXRainDaze.NiilaXx chapter 5 . 6/9/2013
That was so sad!
That is seriously one of the saddest ending I have read for a long time!
| Gabriel's Lil Bitch chapter 19 . 4/16/2013
I love Nightcloud. None of it is her fault. Could you read my NightxCrow story? Link here: s/9198053/1/Look-Again
| Gabriel's Lil Bitch chapter 24 . 3/25/2013
Just a suggestion, how 'bout CrookedstarxWillowbreeze? Willowbreeze was Crookedstar's actual mate and she died in kitting and I think it would be interesting for you to compare Siverstream's death with Willowbreeze's.
| Mossflower44 chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Hey, not bad :3 You made most of this according to what would've actually happened in Bluestar's Prophecy!
Btw, RedBlossom told me to read this ;D
| Gabriel's Lil Bitch chapter 48 . 3/24/2013
You have to do Tigerstar and Sasha, PLEASE!
| The Last Moongazer chapter 60 . 3/21/2013
Those were really cute. I liked the ones that actually told a story more than the reflective ones, but that's just me. Great job!
| Gabriel's Lil Bitch chapter 2 . 3/19/2013
:'( You have succeeded in making me cry. Poor, poor Goldenflower...
| Gabriel's Lil Bitch chapter 60 . 3/4/2013
If your reviews for these drabbles get to 1000, will you do up to seventy?