Reviews for Perfection
MoonleafCloudfur chapter 15 . 8/6/2015
I absolutly love love love your writing. Please continue the story.

HakaishinChampa chapter 6 . 12/3/2013
mossbreeze chapter 15 . 9/23/2013
VioletFox127 chapter 15 . 1/22/2010
Ooh. Cool. I like it. It seems very sweet. I can hardly believe that she was so cute as an apprentice.
Icefire chapter 15 . 1/4/2010
Yay! Another Chappie! even better! A new Chappie on my B-Day! Yays *nomms virtual cookie*
Smokestream chapter 14 . 1/1/2010
Please update soon! I can't wait to know what else happens. Moonpaw and Shadepaw seem like they would have been a really cute couple even though I never would have guessed it.
Dawnfire2222 chapter 14 . 11/3/2009
you are awesome!
Coby Coyle chapter 14 . 10/3/2009
OMG I cant wait for the next chapter!

-screams- I cant BELIEVE you left it there LOL

Oh it was great!

Poor Moonpaw...

Shadepaw. Yuck. He's such a two faced thing LOL

Too bad I hate Heathertail...

No fail on this chapter. I like it :3

-hugs you-
Coby Coyle chapter 13 . 10/3/2009
But Moonpaw in this chapter did great

She seems like such a bright and sweet cat.

Too bad shes horribly evil.

Coby Coyle chapter 12 . 10/3/2009
GREAT CHAPPY -screams-

I love Rainy and Swifty x3

Aww Moonkit sounds so cute...HOW CAN SHE BE EVIL

God Wingfeather was a hell of a lot better of a father then Stormtail was.

Brightmoon sounds gorgeous.

Great job Rainy!


JessicaAutumnleaf chapter 13 . 10/1/2009
Plz add more! I love this story!
Riptide Anaklusmos chapter 13 . 9/26/2009
Nightshimmer chapter 12 . 9/14/2009
Nightshimmer chapter 11 . 9/14/2009
IM SO SORYR but sombody murdered my cat :( (zoey was her name) and iv been kinda to heart broken for fan fiction :( AWESOME CHAP THOUGH~
icefire chapter 11 . 8/30/2009
OMG! Awesome chapter! I luv the tigerstar evilness-y-ness! (lol, random!)I hope we get a rainpath chapter next! keep writing! your stories are what keeps me sain while I wait for the fourth apprentice to come out, which I just realized is only like a month and a half away! *fangirl scream!* keep writing!
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