|Reviews for The crimes of alchemy|
| ToscaThorCat chapter 4 . 1/31
ouch... poor Tony! But I see her point.
| sweetleftyrose chapter 17 . 1/20
Please update soon. I am curious to find out how they plan to get back. Also you should proof read your stories. There are a lot of typos that make the story hard to read.
| zomgonozdinosaurs chapter 17 . 12/15/2013
Ahhhh! You have to finish this please T-T
| Firefaerie81 chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
I've gotta say, this is the best FMA crossover I've read so far. I really hope you haven't abandoned it, since I'd love to see where it goes from here. You're a good writer.
| Kazaru13 chapter 17 . 11/26/2013
YAY! Eds gonna see Al again! Cant wait for the next chapter!
| Radiant Celestial Aura chapter 17 . 10/25/2013
Very good story! I do hope you update... someday...
| Literature work chapter 17 . 9/26/2013
Omg so awesome please continue
| Yuu3 chapter 17 . 9/24/2013
Love this. Absolutely love it. The whole idea of having a crossover between NCIS and FMA is crazy but it's wonderful! My only problem is with your English. The occasion sips, spelling mistake and wrong word used. "Wasn't" and "was" is different. They have opposite meanings. Really, if you're still continuing this fic, get someone to re-read what you written. You are missing out letters turning "she" to "he" or wrong letters even, "his" is not the same as "him". It get pretty annoying after a while.
| DreamweaverAki chapter 17 . 8/7/2013
OOOOH! I love this story! It's soooo good and amazing! WHY! Why haven't you updated in three years! You can't just leave us readers hanging like this! You must continue! Will Ed and Al finaly be reunited? How will the NCIS handle the whole no one shows up in the database thing? How will they try and get back? WIll they tell NCIS the truth? Will Ling eat NCIs out of house and home? Who else came through the gate? WHAT"S GOING TO HAPPEN!? Please, please, please, please, please update! Pretty please with five cherries on top! PLEASE! It's way too good ta just leave it hanging like this!
| Caliope chapter 17 . 7/19/2013
Donde esta Envy?! MAS!
| Artemis's best Huntress chapter 17 . 7/7/2013
Please update! I really love this story, and I don want to see it waste away!
| Tormound chapter 13 . 7/5/2013
the pain happens cause he is attaching the arm to his nerves.
| Tormound chapter 3 . 7/5/2013
Pretty sure taking blood samples with a needle on an unwilling person is illegal.
| allen niichan chapter 17 . 6/18/2013
Can't wait until the next chapter!
| 19Teardrop94 chapter 17 . 6/15/2013
AH! It's been too long since you put up another chapter! Hope you're still there and able to put up another! I wanna see Ed and Al meet each other again :D