|Reviews for Illusion of Gaia|
| Milly chapter 30 . 4/27/2014
I really enjoyed reading this. I felt like experiencing the story again but didn't feel like bearing the game for like the 20th time. While searching aroundI came across this. And I read the entire fanfic in one sitting. I really love what you did with the characters. The only thing I didn't like so much is how you referred to the dungeons as dungeons and bosses as bosses. Since its a story I guess I expected it to not be game like. If that's even a word. But it didn't take away from the experience at all, don't get me wrong. I lobed every second of it.
| Crystal114 chapter 16 . 2/15/2014
I...did not know...the ones dancing were men. I seriously thought they were all females. I must be blind.
That interaction Will had with the first angel made me giggle.
| Crystal114 chapter 15 . 2/14/2014
I always get a little sad thinking about Seth. Wish he could have had a chance to travel with them.
I really do appreciate you rewriting the game, I really love it.
| Crystal114 chapter 14 . 2/14/2014
I sort of thought I HAD to use Will in Mu because Eric was in the same room with the vampires and geez I didn't know it didn't matter. No wonder why I had a tough time here.
| Crystal114 chapter 13 . 2/14/2014
Well I'm currently replaying this when I remember this story and I saw where I left off and groaned because I'm currently here now too. Oh I hate this place as much as you.
| Josh Grinsteinne chapter 11 . 12/1/2013
When I used to play the game I never noticed that sentence being out of place but now...yeah that is actually kind of funny. The one about the joint, I am sure they only realized what that sounded like after the game was released...Omnisage out
| Guest chapter 30 . 8/26/2013
Immensely accurate. I loved it.
| P.T. Piranha chapter 30 . 5/19/2013
I was hoping that you'd extend the epilogue at least a little bit.
Over all, good job. This was a fun novelization to read. The spelling/grammar was not perfect, all throughout, but it was still an enjoyable read and a cool way of re-imagining one of the games I have fondest memories of.
| P.T. Piranha chapter 25 . 5/19/2013
You have an interesting take on Shadow, and he's quite entertaining when he interacts with Will. In a previous review I said that I'd look forward to Shadow talking with Will, and I am not disappointed.
| P.T. Piranha chapter 23 . 5/19/2013
That's an interesting way of interpreting Freedan's situation.
And I like this sort of conflict you're giving Will. He was pretty unimpeded in the actual game, so it's good that this version gives him something more to contend with.
| P.T. Piranha chapter 14 . 5/19/2013
Interesting, Will managed to make it through an entire dungeon without the help of Freedan. I never did notice that logically Lilly would be there with Will while he's doing all his Gaia/Freedan stuff.
The word you were looking for is 'altar'. When it's spelled 'alter', that means to make a change. When it's 'altar', it's the place at a temple you pray to.
| P.T. Piranha chapter 12 . 5/19/2013
You used 'here' instead of 'hear' during the rescue scene.
Anyway, I considered skipping this chapter because dungeons are more fun to watch than read, but thanks to Will and Freedan's interactions, I found it interesting enough to keep reading. I can't wait to see what Shadow adds to their dynamic.
| P.T. Piranha chapter 3 . 5/18/2013
Your use of apostrophes is rather inconsistent. You keep forgetting to place them in the same words each time, though you remember them with different words.
Other than that, I have no problems with this novelization yet.
| Crystal114 chapter 12 . 4/2/2013
This chapter had me rolling XD I'm glad they are getting along now though.
Now an even worse part is coming up...
| Crystal114 chapter 11 . 4/2/2013
I think Neil is very cool. . .
All the pairings in this game I don't even like, but oh well. Opinions opinions.
I Ha-a-a-ate the Sky Garden, I was in it all day yesterday! But reading about it will be a snap. ...That sentence, I just got that. Good job on this story so far.