Reviews for Surrender
roswellwbfan chapter 2 . 4/15/2012
You're evil for stopping it here, but thanks for posting what you did!
thetreasure11 chapter 2 . 6/16/2011
O.O Wow. Just wow. That was shiny! I have no constructive criticism for you (except to say don't change a thing!)
Sorrick chapter 2 . 3/12/2011
Not bad but it seemed to be barely an M-rated story, certainly not the Hard R/NC17 you proclaimed.
xRavingLunaticx chapter 2 . 1/23/2011
Keep it up. I enjoy your writing!
wolfish-willow chapter 2 . 12/7/2009
Wow, that was awesome. Good thing they've got each other. Hope they don't end up with hypothermia. Great story
Content-To-Write chapter 2 . 8/18/2009
This is beautifully written. I love the repetition in the first chapter and descriptions. One of my fav quotes, "a fantasy or few" ha, very clever ;)