|Reviews for The End of all time 2|
| adrogoz chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
This story is disappointing, mostly because a crossover of this proportion could have had so much potential. But as it is at the moment, it flicks between stories too quickly, is written like a play scoot instead of a normal story, and retains many inaccuracies to the original series (Makuta is composed of an energy called Antidermis encased in armour. He doesn't have a gallbladder.
I'm going to follow you in the hope that you can write a story like this one, only with some attempt at seriousness and good storytelling, because if you could do that, then I'm sure it would be really great. This one just seems like rushed, hard to read nonsense, but with a glimmer of what it could have been...