Reviews for Offerings
hootowl chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Some things could be expanded upon. It also seems to be quite the violent reaction in that first part. She went to a lot of work just to retaliate for an awkward question. It's a cute idea though.
Nigihayami Haruko chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
A little quick moving, but not too fast paced that I couldn't enjoy the characters or the plot. Love to read an extended version!
Moonlight Ookami chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
smooth.
Hana-chanS2 chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
That was hilarious! and it was a good read compared to those other stories that were way too long and boring :)
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
A bit jumpy but awesome none the less. XD

Ari chan
Moonlight Querida chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
It wasn't too jumpy,but it was a little fast at the last part. However, it was really good:)
Reignashii chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
hysterical laughter* that was just damn funny. too bad its only a one shot x3 i would love to see where this goes hehehe
akai tenshi chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
at the risk of sounding really stupid, why was kaoru so mad at the condom line?

that aside, i thought it was funny how kenshin would get stuck in a job that makes him hand out free condoms.. and how sweet it was that he used the same line in the end.. :P
Lucifer Hatter chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
wow, that is the most clever pick up line i have ever heard. Well, not so much clever as hilarious! Love the story, i hope you delve farther into the RK world _
abubi-chan chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
this has been very interesting indeed. i can't wait to read more stories from you!
LilHobbitBookWorm chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
definitely an interesting idea, i do feel like it was a little bit rushed, but i like the whole college take. usually i dont like the modern day fics, but this wasnt bad.

Bravo.

Jenn
rain chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
So funny how you could make a story using a condom. But why is Kaoru mad? The story seemed to be rushed but I still like it.
transmigratory chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Aw, cute. What an interesting way to meet someone. Haha.

Made me smile.
scarylady chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
That was very cute! Kenshin WOULD be someone working for the student health center and stuck handing out condoms *snerk* I know it says "complete," but more would also be nice :)
gabyhyatt chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
i love it
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