|Reviews for Suffocating And Breathing|
| kluna chapter 3 . 10/13/2013
Please update! I have been waiting for a long time!
| enni chapter 3 . 2/3/2013
This is one hell of a good story, so please write and update a new chapter or two or three :D.
| Ryzuya chapter 3 . 11/29/2011
pleeeeeeeeeeaseee update soon..im soo in love with this fic...i love how the characters are still in their rightfull original roles xD.
| Ryzuya chapter 2 . 11/29/2011
im seriously loving this storyline!
| groundedreamer chapter 2 . 11/27/2011
It's really good so far! I like it! I hope you update fast!
| shebacatb10 chapter 3 . 11/26/2011
Interesting story so far looking forward tpo the next chapter.
| organic haircoat chapter 3 . 11/26/2011
go write more chapters! I'll beta if it brings them faster! Ilove your writing style and totally understand the people-who-hate-slash thing. just had a whole week of it myself, I'm yaoi deprived.
| LuanRina chapter 3 . 11/26/2011
YAY for the long-awaited update! It's been so awhile that I actually had to re-read the whole story to remember what it was about, but it was worth it *nods* Definitely one of the best and most interesting plots I've come across so far (and that's a hell of A LOT!). And the style is great too, as well as the flow - I truly enjoyed reading. You really don't give yourself enough credit for your writing, dearest. I'm telling you, the story is interesting and catchy, at least in my humble opinion. Even the fact that Kaname-sama is married to that stupid, ugly bitch (no offense, you may not generally dislike her, but I damn hate the whore, so please don't mind my language when it concerns her slutty self *bows*) works for it - adds more intrigue and tension and all ;) I'm not even that much irritated with it (much less than I should be actually), especially when I let my imagination flow and provide me with what might happen further in the story with our dear boys XD
Anyway! The chapter was great. Finally Kaname-sama and Zero-chan met, you're really ebil for making us wait so long with that even more EBIL cliffie! TToTT But well, I'm glad you're back and sincerely hope that you'll give us more wonderful updates and delicious Kaname-sama x Zero-chan moments ;9 They were so totally in character btw! I especially loved Zerorin with his 'whatever' attitude there XD So cute! *_* He is just as irresistibly adorable as ever, the lil' thing *squeezes Zero-chan tightly while she still can before Kaname-sama claims his territory* Though, admittedly, Kaname-sama's thoughts about the Level Ds and Zero-chan in general did kind of grate on my nerves with its arrogance and inconsideration - it wasn't like Zerorin became one because he wanted to or actually enjoyed the whole thing. Kaname-sama was a total jerk there *huffs*
Buwahhaha! XD OMG Aidou is always Aidou! I so laughed my ass off at all the moments with him! He is just so impossibly hilarious to read about! It's great that you put him in this chapter, his presence made it all the better with added humor XD
Missed Ichirun, but glad that the bitch wasn't there - she's damn annoying, although I agree to bear with her insufferable presence only to see the development of the story and our dear boys' relationship ;3 You did say that they'd be meeting a lot more, so I'm really looking forward to it! :D
Wonder what Kaname-sama will decide on actions he wants taken against Zero-chan. . .And what will happen to our dear Zerorin as well. . .
I'M SO EXCITED TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT! ! ! PLEASE UPDATE SUPER ASAP! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! :D
| ben4kevin chapter 3 . 11/26/2011
Oh bad start between them, ah but Zero can defend himself.
| snipits42 chapter 3 . 11/25/2011
Good chapter, it really shows their hate very well. I want more
| enni chapter 3 . 11/25/2011
I LIKE IT! I like it. I LIKE IT!
Thx fo uploading this and please give me more! :D
| Amathys chapter 2 . 11/21/2011
I love the story. Very entertaining has a lot of pontential. And I would not mind cliffhangers if you updated more often. Clearly two years is far to long for a cliffhanger and just disappoints the readers who follow up on your every word. Anyway sorry if I sounded harsh just had to get that out the way. I'm disappointed as well as other people who read stories thy never get finished, kinda why I only ever read completed fictions.
| organic haircoat chapter 2 . 9/19/2011
night...time...reading...more chapters please?
| ben4kevin chapter 2 . 11/30/2010
please tell me you'll update soon
| LuanRina chapter 2 . 4/18/2010
Interesting, indeed. I like it so far, but CRAVING for more! Also can't wait to see their first meet _~
Please update ASAP! x3