Reviews for The Harder they Fall
leo22cuervo chapter 12 . 10/29/2009
Nice chapter, is funny to see the guys surrounding Bella, and she totally oblivious to the competition.

And the drama rise with the last POV, do we got a stalker of Edward here? I must say, that's new.

Saludos, keep the good job
Linzzer220 chapter 12 . 10/29/2009
omg i LOVED it! all those guys coming up to sit with her at lunch...too freakin' funny! i think Felix might be interested, but i think he's just genuinely being nice to Bella. Mike obviously wants her, Ben totally doesn't-he's too busy being smitten about Angela ;), Tyler wants to get with her too...and that was hilarious when Jasper walked over and trumped them all! haha

As for the mystery POV...i think it could be 3 ppl: Tanya cuz she's pissed-but that seems too obvious...i'm leaning towards Lauren the most, cuz she keeps her eye on Bella all the time...or it could be, Jessica...i thought Jessica was mentioned as a receptionist for him but he hated when she threw herself at him all the time. I can't remember if that was true, haha, i hope i didn't make that up...but my guess is Lauren anyway! Can't wait for the next chapter! !
elizabethan chapter 12 . 10/29/2009
Hm, Tanya, perhaps?

Jasper's observation about Bella's dining companions was quite accurate - P-sing contest for sure.

So Edward's not jealous - well, not yet. Hmm...
Kerry Hale chapter 12 . 10/29/2009
Great chapter. I have a feeling that was Tanya. Loved it. WOw Jasper sure can be an ass when he wants to
lisainthesky21 chapter 12 . 10/29/2009
:) looks great! I love Legal Escort Bella.
livvi84 chapter 12 . 10/29/2009
Tanya, of course! I am in love with this!
montannaleigh chapter 12 . 10/29/2009
no idea who the mystery person is, but DAYUM SON amazing chapter :D
Catbratty chapter 12 . 10/29/2009
Loved the chapter, poor little Jasper, I think he will be getting his heart broke, maybe he will chill out a little bit!

I believe the ?POV is Tanya!
HeathersTwilight chapter 12 . 10/29/2009
I am so glad you updated. This is one of my favorite stories.

My guess, maybe Victoria? Second guess would be Tanya.
pkitten21 chapter 12 . 10/29/2009
I'm guessing Tanya...or maybe Charlotte and her boss Peter? (That's a stretch.) can't wait to find out!
wonderingseakinglearning chapter 12 . 10/29/2009
I'm guessing Tanya.

Makes me laugh that Jasper was so concerned about Bella at lunch with those guys. Edward and he did not even realized, I don't thing, she had no clue they were having a pissing contest.

I'm excited for the next update.
azure0610 chapter 12 . 10/29/2009
I was JUST messing with my alerts list a few hours ago and my eyes zoomed in on this and I sighed. Then BAM an update! It's like I knew, LOL

LOL! The pissing match between the guys at the table was a trip. Just wait till they get a load of her "dating" Mr. Cullen, LOL. I can't wait.

Jasper's kind of a dick. I wonder if that's a trait of not being with Alice? I think I might exchange my ticket on the Jasper/Charlotte train if he keeps that attitude up. I mean Edward is his friend. Jasper is the CFO right? I know he's watching out for Edward but he doesn't even know Bella. Get to know her.

Are you setting Charlotte up to cheat on him with the boss Peter thing?

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We weren’t going to drag this courtship out for months, just a few weeks. If the timetable was sped up we’d deal with it.

That is HANDS DOWN one of the BEST things an author can say in an Edward/Bella story.

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*gasps* Oh Lordy mystery person enters the fold. I say it's either Tanya, Charlotte or JJ right now

But I'm betting on a woman. Only women in fics do they "oh she's not very pretty" The men are always drooling over her Bambi looks
sherylb chapter 12 . 10/29/2009
Well, I'm guessing that POV is Tanya...I don't know why she should be jealous, she didn't truly care about Edward anyway...maybe a case of she doesn't really want him but doesn't want anyone else to have him...

Looks like bella may have to forgo lunches in the cafeteria!
Mn1 chapter 12 . 10/29/2009
Cute chapter. I like that Bella is confident without being cocky or sure of herself...she didn't even realize they guys were in a pissing contest.

It was good to see Jasper cautious of Bella. It shows he is a good friend for Edward.

Looking forward to more.
TLammy chapter 12 . 10/29/2009
Good chapter. Wonder why Jasper is so nervous about Bella, she really wasn't doing anything wrong. Technically her and Edward aren't even a couple yet. Glad Edward didn't get all jealous and possessive, it's too soon for that ;) As for the mystery POV could it be Tanya or is there another woman after Edward, hm. Look forward to the next chapter ;)
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