Reviews for The Wind Flower
Io's Chest chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
Well...I can't really say whether or not I was surprised by this new chapter or not. On one hand, you completely tipped my first review on it's head with that last section. On the other hand...you you completely tipped my first review on it's head with that last section. I don't know if you had that slow start in the first chapter on purpose, or if my review just stuck a creative chord in you. I think I'll go ahead and assume the former, however. Regardless, it's shaping up to be quite the epic. I sense lots of hilarity to be had in future chapters. Well done, and continue the good work, as always.

AISB
Thyrokio chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
Nice, so this time he actually passed and Kazehanna is checking to see if he's worthy of being her Ashikabi?

Good work
Dudtheman chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
great stuff as always im really looking forward to see how this story will progress. thanks as always Dudtheman
Thyrokio chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
GOod work
MRBee chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
i've said this once and i'll say it again

... Kazehana is the best...
Patrick Gleason chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
A 'Kazehana first' fic! One of my dreams realized at least! I love "Minato's One and Only Wife", sure, but Kazehana IS my favorite Sekirei after all. And I must say, I absolutely LOVE how you always change the direction of the fic... It still resembles the cannon storyline, so we aren't lost, but it has a original 'thing', that keeps us from feeling like it's just the original manga in prose. The 'castle' in MOOW, and 'Minato passing' in this fic as the 'breaking points' are brilliant, and very believable, too.

Minato's depression about his life was masterful. It's pretty common in real life ("I got in college. So what, now?"), and gives a realistc touch to the fic. Kazehana was a little bit too manipulative for my tastes though... But, she just met him. The whole point is to see her changing with time, because of him, I guess...

Actually, I was planning to write something in these lines... But since you already started this one, and I can't hope to write something better, I stick to my other idea, and delve into the mysteries of our little wagtails' origins... That will take some time though...
colin chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
Wow what a luck bastard nice College, nice girl.
weixuan18 chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
Lol, Minato, is that lucky or unlucky?
omegarulesall chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
excellent chapter. keep up the good work.
piercing kage kitsune chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
not bad.
Nameless Beast chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
I was hopeing that you was going to make Kazehana the main female in 1 of your stories and this came you as always you have a great talent for keep up your good work and as always keep it fun.
Enigma-Nemesis chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
Awesome chapter (and the beginning part where he's seeing the reactions of others to the examination results had me thinking of Love Hina).

I'm surprised to see that Minato's family (especially his mother) will be visiting him so soon. Although I guess it makes sense, since he passed this time around, that his family will have some sort of celebration.

Can't wait to see more of Minato and Kazehana :P
Slicki chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
o spicy ;-) ha well again great chapter! Can't wait till next time!
keplo chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
fufufu ;) very amusing you have such a skill at writting i cant think anything bad of it and such a imagination well this sounds like ass licking but what can i say? it would be stupid to acuse good story as bad

the last lines were amusing ;)
MistressWinowyll chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
Well, I can see how Minato would just have to refuse her offer and just turn away from her right there. No kissing on the lips, sheesh! She asks for to much...

Fu, Fu, Fu...

I couldn't keep a straight face on that one. Yeah!, Minato-kun! Treat that moment like it's your last, my friend! Besides, I'm sure you'll make memories that will make you blush for the rest of your life.

Your Mistress.
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