Reviews for The Wind Flower
The PhantomHokage chapter 6 . 8/9/2009
Oh damn man well really he should have know his sister would call their mom the moment she got away from him, he sould have taken the phone from her but now his mom is their and now we will see how his mother and his wife will react to each other it's obvious they don't like each other
The PhantomHokage chapter 5 . 8/9/2009
Oh man well he took it ok and got married to her though now his sister entered the picture wonder how things will go now haha this seem like things are getting good now
The PhantomHokage chapter 4 . 8/9/2009
Who she finally kisses him with her lips and lets him wing her I see things are becoming serious for the two now I can't wait until to see how things go from their
The PhantomHokage chapter 3 . 8/9/2009
Another nice chapter lol I so saw the head whacking coming and with Kazehana their will be a lot of it though I think she should have moved in with Kazehana but yeah starting a relationship someone might want to wait a while after all moving in with someone is a big step
The PhantomHokage chapter 2 . 8/9/2009
Another nice chapter I can see things going like that if he met Kazehana first and yeah she would keep him from kissing her until she was sure of things would work between them
The PhantomHokage chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
Nice beginning I liked it seems like it will be a great story
Macavity Omega chapter 6 . 8/7/2009
Hmm... I get it... The "If" part is that since Kazehana gave Minato something to work for, he got into Tokyo U with his sister, whom, finding out he's gotten married, called their mother, whom in turn explains things to Minato.

My guess is that their relationship will be less strained, and if/when Yukari gets kidnapped again she may not die. However, this may prevent Minato from going to war with Minaka, unless of course something else happens to upset him or push him to do so.

It's getting interesting now... Keep it up.
SaphireShade chapter 6 . 8/7/2009
Hm, I think I might like this one better than your other one.
omegarulesall chapter 6 . 8/7/2009
Loved the scene between minato and yukari. keep up the great work and update soon.
SyncroX chapter 6 . 8/7/2009
Lol, revealed early this time.
piercing kage kitsune chapter 6 . 8/7/2009
good chapter;)
jaredhimself31 chapter 6 . 8/7/2009
wow, talk about a plot twist
signora del cielo delle stelle chapter 6 . 8/7/2009
youngd2506 chapter 6 . 8/7/2009
Interesting your having his mother come out an tell him that she's one of the ones who helped start the Sekirei plan. Wonder how he's going to take it? Wonder if Minaka is going to get killed in this one as well? Because he hasn't seen that his Sekirei gets taken should they ever lose. I'm guessing his mom will tell him wonder how he will take that?

Looking forward to next chapter.
MistressWinowyll chapter 6 . 8/7/2009
You HAVE to show some kind of verbal duke feast with those two explaining how Takami won Minato's father and how now Kazehana has her son. I'm pretty sure it would have something along the lines of "I got the rich/brilliant one." "I got the kind, loving, handsome one" "I got the extravagant one" "Minato makes love like a beast, makes my orgasms sing to the heavens, and is hung like the thick end of a bat."


Just a suggestion.

Your Mistress.
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