Reviews for The Wind Flower
maxe03 chapter 10 . 11/18/2014
how many classes has he missed so far he better watch it or he might fail after he finally made in that would suck
maxe03 chapter 9 . 11/18/2014
If Yukari is as big a perve and borderline rapist as she is in cannon she doens't have the right to say anything
maxe03 chapter 8 . 11/18/2014
i always thought it was some bs she would barge in his room then hit him saying he' being indecent. he should move out if this keeps up
maxe03 chapter 7 . 11/18/2014
so she tells him all that but hides who his dad is? you know for someone who's sappose to be smart i'm surprised he hasn't figured it out or if he dosn't soon
Luffy D. Hancock chapter 16 . 10/31/2014
Sandaime Hokage chapter 17 . 10/14/2014
Really enjoyed what you have done so far, very well written with an interesting beginning of Kazahane meeting Minato in a bar.
Godric Kharg chapter 17 . 8/6/2014
Ok, now you NEED to keep writing.. How dare you just leave us stranded after that! ;)
Godric Kharg chapter 13 . 8/6/2014
In regards to ashikabi death, and sekirei auto termination. I'm not sure about how accurate that might be... It may be one of minakas rules... Which might be got around..

Nothing against gay or lesbians, but what if he set it up that each sekirei was intended for a ashikabi of the opposite gender...

Chiho and Uzume both being female.. Would end up a loophole, a detail, and we know at this point he wasn't patient with details, things like tuning sekirei he left for those better At it...

Of course, Takami prolly wouldn't notify him if a loophole had been found...

Enjoying the minor alterations to the story, hope there are many many more chapters... But I see the last update stamp and feel a bit depressed the story here will pause...
Rekxyen chapter 17 . 8/3/2014
Please do more it is amazing and I love your works of fine fan fiction literature
Animana chapter 17 . 7/27/2014
Wow, just wonderful. There are only a handful of really good Sekirei fics and this is one of the best. Kazehana is one of my favorite Sekirei and the way you portray her is top notch. I know you no longer have the time to keep up with your fics anymore like you used too, but I hope, one day, that you can return to this one.
Xenick chapter 17 . 6/24/2014
this is an interesting story.
will you ever finish it?
NegimaFan chapter 17 . 5/27/2014
Is there any way, ANY WAY, I could entice, encourage, or bribe you to continue this story? Would promising to buy any and all of the books you place on Amazon work? I would seriously love to see you come back and work on this story. I did not start reading sekirei fanfiction until recently, and yours are clearly the best. I know it has been a long time, but is there any possible chance you could work on this story again? If you put an item on eBay that simply said FUNDING FOR NEXT BOOK I would puchase it just for a chance to see this story completed.
ethan.lukkar chapter 17 . 3/16/2014
Magnifecent chapter can't wait for more
dullLogic chapter 17 . 3/16/2014
What happened to Shiina and Yukari? Did she wing him?
Another sekirei for Minato?
Was hoping that Akitsu would be Minato's sekirei...
Ephemeral-Nightboy chapter 3 . 3/11/2014
"I can't even imagine the kind of woman who could possibly top you."

This sentence, in reference to Kazehana, struck me as possibly the most hilarious double entandre ever.
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