Reviews for The Slow Bang
soybean16 chapter 10 . 4/25
Love it. Shame it was dropped.
Magic2488 chapter 10 . 2/7
I love this story. So freaking good. I know 8 years is a long time but maybe you could think of coming back to update it?
Faol Ban chapter 10 . 9/26/2017
Hoping that you come back to finish this, I'm liking the story so far and would love to see more.
merniizztat chapter 10 . 5/14/2017
Update please
Draco Oblivion chapter 8 . 3/9/2017
Wow, what's Uley whining about now?
Draco Oblivion chapter 7 . 3/9/2017
"So, unless you want to be forced into being mated to a wolf" so the wolves would have raped her if she wasn't first marked by a vampire? And as it stands one broke into her home while she appeared to be mid-coitus? Hmm, Bella looks cold. Maybe she could us a nice fur coat? Or blanket?
Draco Oblivion chapter 6 . 3/9/2017
Bella really is remarkably cool about this though I suppose that could just be the fact that an incredibly attractive vampire is lying on top of her and making it difficult to think. Have to wonder what the wolves think they can do, throwing their weight around like that
Draco Oblivion chapter 5 . 3/9/2017
I liked this, a wolf fucked up but they weren't all painted as demonic hellspawn. Still wish he'd have crossed the treaty line so Alice coulda kicked him back over
Has Alice just decided to no longer hide what she is because if not I wonder how she plans to explain that last scene
Draco Oblivion chapter 4 . 3/9/2017
Huh, I always thought home economics was just cooking, do they actually do stuff like this? I loved it either way though
Draco Oblivion chapter 3 . 3/9/2017
Guess everyone knows that Alice is a creepy stalker person, good thing she's far too loveable to not forgive. Jake on the otherhand, not cute at all
Draco Oblivion chapter 2 . 3/9/2017
Her attempt is more excusable than Edward's but she loses in execution. Not sure whether or not it'd be good to be a less talented creeper than Edward
Hahaha, my god. She's won the most creepy scene competition though. Finds her bleeding in the middle of nowhere and presses against her body and whispers her name in her ear. Not judging, but wow xD
Draco Oblivion chapter 1 . 3/9/2017
My mind kinda just went to a dark place but if Jasper and Alice's romance followed canon plot then it's pretty similar to how she feels about Bella right now. What if this is just going to be a cycle till she has these self-fulfilling prophecies about the people she's "destined" to be with, leaving one after the other just as she's about to meet the next. Each and every one a possible mate but in chasing each possibility she'll never have her forever...
talon2007 chapter 10 . 11/30/2016
Read this a few times now, always enjoyed it while it lasts. Sad its abandoned.
OllyOllyOxycodone chapter 10 . 12/14/2015
You were talking about not abandoning the story just 2 chapters ago and now look at it...

Anyway, this is a pretty solid story and I enjoyed most of it except for chapters 7 and 8. Those were crap. I hope by some one in a million chance you do return, you continue this.
milagglad chapter 9 . 10/24/2015
Update this story soon not forsake please
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