|Reviews for You Were There|
| anafinchel chapter 12 . 3/29
lovely ending! I really like this story a lot! :))))
| anafinchel chapter 6 . 3/29
I definitely like your approach...I hate it when they turn him into a player thus breaking little Bella's heart
I dont like Tanya, but I guess it makes the story more realistic :))))
| lilysmily chapter 12 . 10/26/2014
WOW sooooo cute!1
I loved to story...
I just read it all in one...
Bella and Edward were sooooo cute together...
but I nearly cried as Tanya came into the picture!
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/15/2013
I hate Edward. I would understand if he broke with Tanya the day he met Bella again. But he didin't. He hurt Bella. He was with Tanya in front of this poor girl. I hate him.
| Nehnah14 chapter 12 . 2/11/2012
This was...heartwrenching and sweet. I hated the fact that Edward got together with Tanya, but I do like that you didn't make her out to be a bitch. That was a nice change from other stories (including my own! Lol).
Your grammer and spelling does need work, but overall the story was a win for me. Nice job!
| Edwardlover4vr chapter 13 . 7/19/2011
It was just beautiful ! AMAZING !
| StreetPinkMafia69 chapter 10 . 7/16/2011
This would be the BEST story I ever read so far!
See? I'm crying and grinning like an idiot at the same time.
I friggin' love it! 3
| Stephaniie49 chapter 13 . 7/11/2011
OMFG best story i have ever read! but it would of been better if u wrote bella havin her kids! but the story waz REALLY AMAZING! plz make more storys or another story about Twilight!
| lily mase chapter 13 . 7/11/2011
ummm.. what does this mean? ._.
| ilovetopaz7 chapter 12 . 11/10/2010
I This story! It's so Cute.
| G33K3D.OuT.PrOf3sSiOnal chapter 12 . 8/11/2010
OME! OMC! I JUST LOVE THIS STORY ITS ONE OF THE BEST TWI-ORPHAN MEETING STORIES IVE READ I LOVE THE ENDING*VERY CLICHE* YOU DID AN AMZING JOB ON THIS-WELL I BETTER GO BEFORE I WRITE A STORY IN A REVIEW! O)
| shelby chapter 12 . 6/25/2010
i love your story. it is so cute. especially cause its saying that history will repeat itself.
| DeDe43221 chapter 12 . 5/16/2010
I LOVE THIS STORY IT WAS VERY SWEET AND I LOVED EVERY MOMENT OF IT
| twilight-is-lovee chapter 12 . 5/6/2010
AW! This story was amazing. Of course, I caught grammatical errors and such, but that's just the beta in me.
I loved the entire story so much. It almost made me cry at a few points. Haha.
Oh! I do think you should change the rating to an M, though, because of the lime you threw in in the last chapter. xD
| femke chapter 12 . 4/6/2010
it was verry beautiful
i loved it verry verry mutch
ps sorry if my english isn't verry good
i'm a belge :p