Reviews for The Lion and The Mouse
Me chapter 7 . 4/16/2011
I'm really enjoying this story. Just read it all in one sitting. Has it been abandoned... or?

I really hope not! It's really good, I love Lily and Blaine, which is unusual, 'cause usually I hate female characters in Fallout fanfiction.

Thanks very much!
LillyWhiteRosePetals chapter 7 . 9/6/2010
good story.

I like having a new character. I am interested in getting to know him.
Countess of Monleigh chapter 7 . 7/1/2010
Wow. All I can really say is wow. This is well written and very violent. The two best things to a story. Or so I say. I can not wait for more on this one.


L0st'n'F0und chapter 7 . 6/23/2010
THIS STORY RULES! Please continue
Weretiger Marduk chapter 7 . 3/16/2010
nice. Can't wait for more.
InkiBlinkiPinki chapter 7 . 2/2/2010
Wow! I'm really impressed w/ ur story _ Even though ur OC is a masochistic a-hole he's really enjoyable to read about mainly b/c he's so unpredictable... And I'm so curious to learn more about him and his past (how he knows James and what his relationship w/ Renault is)! And the "relationship" he has w/ Lily is pretty damn funny too _ Can't wait for your next update!
SundayWinterChild chapter 7 . 1/14/2010
Thank you, thank you, thank you for such a well written story! Your characterization is a breath of fresh air. The dialogue flows so well and is so fitting for each person. I love how you've taken the main quest but tweaked it to turn it into your own story. There are so many Fallout 3 fics out there that are barely more than glorified walk-throughs! Above all, thank you for taking the time to show respect for your readers by using proper grammar, punctuation and proof-reading. It's obvious to me that you go through each chapter with a fine-toothed comb to find errors. Thank you, yet again! I will be watching this very closely indeed!
Tesla.Cannon chapter 7 . 1/11/2010
I've been having a hard time finding well written stories with OC's in them. I have to say that I really enjoyed reading through your seven chapters. Blaine has been created and described very well, and I can't help but like him even though he can be a complete ass in some parts. But, assholes are what make the stories interesting :). You keep him in character very well, and I like how he seems to have this ulterior motive hidden whenever, it makes for a very interesting person. He seems pretty realistic to me as well, with the way he handles himself around people as well as staying true to a mercenary. Lily is pretty cute too, and intelligent. Anyway, before I continue talking your ear off, I really can't wait to read more of your story. It has just the right amount of everything in it. My anticipation is driving me crazy, so, until you continue I'll just have to wait it out. Keep up the fantastic work :) !
Electric Muse chapter 7 . 1/7/2010
Wow, so, I just read through all seven chapters you've written so far, and I must say: BRILLIANT job molding the Wasteland to your liking!

I honestly thought that Blaine was a canon character, and I was really frustrated when I couldn't find him on the Fallout Wiki~ I love the slowly escalating relationship between him and Lily, who is likewise a beautifully done character, and the slowly unfolding stories on both of their ends. I'm SO looking forward to more of this!

And I'd buy you a new Fallout disk if I could, I really really would. I'm currently playing the game, and no one should be denied the pleasure of the Wastelands~

Happy writing~!
MidnightheartXxX chapter 7 . 1/5/2010
Its seems Blaine knows her dad but how? This is getting REALLY intresting, so update soon please!
boneslover13 chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
keep going please please please!
Booboo chapter 6 . 11/28/2009
Please, please update soon! I really like this story! (and I can't keep from wondering if he's gonna give her to Burke, kill her or something else mean) XD
Cait chapter 6 . 10/20/2009
I like this. At some points it was hysterically funny, and at others it got a little dark. Update soon so we can see what happens. Personally? I think there should be more Blaine vs Lily fights. Nice job overall on the last six!
JerichoSydal chapter 6 . 9/28/2009
Man. I can't get enough of this story. Blaine is so badass, but Lily got the better of him, and Blaine isn't to happy about it. I love it.
nefarious vixen chapter 6 . 9/27/2009
Blaine reminds me of this guy I knew in high school who always greeted everyone with a punch in the arm. Yes, this includes girls, and no, he wasn't popular :P Anyway, I've got lots of suspicions as to where this is headed (the adventure/romance thing), but I'm here to enjoy the ride. Looks like a promising tale, hope to read more...
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