|Reviews for Harry McDowell|
| Kithrin chapter 3 . 3/23/2015
btw, mustard gad is NOT something many people survive, considering it makes hydrochloric acid when it contacts water, aa sweat, mucous membranes, eyes, ect, ect. it was used as a military weapon i n WW2
| Vangran chapter 4 . 7/22/2014
Umm, some revision wouldn't go amiss.
| willowskeith chapter 6 . 7/11/2014
Good story so far hope you pick it up again
| MWRANDOM chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
I'm assuming that english is not your first language as grammar, spelling and sentence structure all need work. I like the concept of this and for all I know this could be a great story, but I can't get past having to stop every other sentence to puzzle out your meaning.
| Cyricist001 chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Though a good story, your intro made me facepalm...
Its rather presumptions to declare that Naruto's/Harry's infancy's were the worst. The list of fictional characters who had it worse is very long.
Naruto in his own verse wasn't the worse of, having dozens of characters who suffered more.
Here are some examples of really messed up character childhoods...hell, any one from the mentioned names would consider Harry's (and Naruto's) lives pure heaven and would have switched without a thought.
Artemis Entreri - Forgotten Realms
Hänsel and Gretel - Black Lagoon
Clare - Claymore
Czeslaw Meyer - Baccano
| Wandering Sage chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
the emperor from full metal alchemist? sound bout right :-)
| Zaralann chapter 6 . 12/20/2012
| Reishin Amara chapter 6 . 11/10/2012
| Kithrin chapter 4 . 7/8/2012
I just want to point out a problem you seem to have with the past tenses of some words.
Beat IS the past tense of beaten, Beated isn't a word. you have multiple errors of this type where you added a 'ed' to the end of a past tense word. here is short list of past tense words that don't have 'ed' at end for future reference.
, and thats all can remember off top of my head...
| Akuma-Heika chapter 4 . 6/23/2012
Some interesting concepts but I have never been a big NagiEva fan...much more of a NegiEva shipper.
Had some other points but can't remember them...lol
| god of all chapter 6 . 10/2/2011
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
| Hanzo of the Salamander 2.0 chapter 6 . 9/17/2011
I look forward to reading what happens next in your story
| SSJ-Jolt chapter 6 . 3/9/2011
Plotwise, pretty darn brilliant.
But you need to do some SERIOUS proof reading. Large parts are barely readable through all the jumbled grammer and sentance structure. If you could fix it all up this could easily be one of the best fanfics in existance... but right now... eh...
| Ultimate-Zelda-fan chapter 6 . 1/29/2011
In the words of Arkham, "Let's welcome chaos!"
| deathgeonous chapter 6 . 12/29/2010
Ohh, continue this please. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.