|Reviews for When the lights go out ONE SHOT!|
| Ella chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
What do you mean you can't write Prosper? This is how he is supposed to be written, there but not there. I liked this and it certainly wouldn't have been out of place in the books itself. Congratulations on a true "Evil Genius" fan fiction.
| amongthewinged chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
Most of it's pretty good. It's just the first few sentances that are throwing the whole thing off. It's just a little too slap-you-in-the-face-with-the-facts. I know it's a big jolt, a big plot twist, but it dosn't need to be fo upfront. The rest is good.
| A Ninny Mouse chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
This is pretty good! Your choice of vocabulary is excellent, your grammar and punctuation errors are minimum and the storyline sticks to the book!
I really hope you write more for this section and Evil Genius/Genius Squad stuff!